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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Left me with a warm happy feel....good story! Please do more.
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February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Thanks for updating:D. I'm so glad you did, but so sad the story is over too. I'll miss it! I was wondering if you're planning on doing an epilogue or sequel? It would be intereting to know how the rest of the situation with Payton's uncle turns out. Is he ever confronted about the abuse?
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February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely story, and thank you also for completing it. With so many good stories being abandoned, I am truly happy to see a wonderful ending to a great story. Hope you will write another since obviously do it well.
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February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story^^ I'm looking forward to the seeing more of Payton and Kane :)
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February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Tristram,
I loved the ending and thanks for writing and sharing such a wonderful story! I do hope we see more of these guys perhaps in another story or perhaps you could write different one-shot ficlets based on Winborne Academy. I did kind of wish that Payton would have told Kane what happened with his uncle. I loved the idea Payton came up with to convert his parents' old house into a children’s home that made me cry.
Hugs, Katie.
I loved the ending and thanks for writing and sharing such a wonderful story! I do hope we see more of these guys perhaps in another story or perhaps you could write different one-shot ficlets based on Winborne Academy. I did kind of wish that Payton would have told Kane what happened with his uncle. I loved the idea Payton came up with to convert his parents' old house into a children’s home that made me cry.
Hugs, Katie.
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February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Um, I don't want to add fuel to the stress you are under but I hope we can expect the final chapter soon. Happy Valentine's Day! I am not pushing but would love to have closure to this story.
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February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Was this the last chapter and I just didn't realize it when I reviewed the first time? I guess it is. I loved it! Thank you!
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February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Part/chapter 16 I mean, sorry about that.
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January 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on part three but I wanted to drop a line to let you know that I LOVE this story so far! I love how Payton squirms under Kane's eye contact let alone voice and I'd love to beat his uncles ass that's for sure! read ya laters!
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January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I read your A/N telling me to leave you alone and was really confused...I've only ever reviewed that you're an excellent writer and that I look forward to your updates. I then looked through the reviews and realized that at least one other person is reviewing as "Anon" too. Sorry for the confusion, I want to make an account but have been having issues with it :(. Don't let the other Anon(s) get you down! Obviously real life might come before writing this story, and you being late on a couple of chapters is no reason to freak out. It's just more proof how great your story is that everyone is so anxious for updates. Hope everything is going well!