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I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

Really digging Intimacy cant wait for the next update hopefully soon :)

Just wanted to check in. Hope you're okay and still working on this story. I'd love to read more (and would be happy to edit anything you wanted to send me: j1likerice@ymail.com). Also wanted to wish you a Happy (Belated) Pi Day! (It was yesterday 3.14)

Hey! Haven't heard from you in a while? Hope you're okay and everything. Thanks so much for the email reply to my review. I tried to email you back but never got a response, so I'm not sure if you got it. If not, I'd be happy to edit/proofread anything you want to send me. Hope you're doing well and had a great holiday season. I'm looking forward to how Seth and Z's encounter will play out.

p.s. You can reach me at jlikerice@ymail.com.

Yay!!! An update! I was so excited when I saw that you'd posted a new chapter for Intimacy. I love reading about Seth and Azrael. I can't wait to find out why Seth stopped replying to Az. What happened? And poor Seth, hiding from Az. I'm really exicted to read the next chapter and find out what happens next. What's Azrael gonna do to Seth? I hope he doesn't torture Seth too much, for not keeping in touch with him. Hopefully, he'll make Seth explain why (especially since then we, the audience, can find out why too!).

Oh, and since it sounds like Z's a single parent, what happened to the kids' mother? Speaking of the kids, yeah I wonder how they'll react to Seth and vice versa. Especially the daughter (who sounds a bit diva-ish). I have a feeling she's not gonna like Seth; I can see her trying to sabotage Seth, seeing him as a rival for her dad's affection and attention. Poor Seth!

Please try to update again soon! I love this story. Oh, I be happy to read chapters over for you, if you'd like. I'm not an English major or anything, but I'm pretty good with grammar and spelling and could check over stuff like that and catch any typos, if you want. Just e-mail me at j1likerice@ymail.com.

Ch. 3: Ut oh! Azrael is back in town and Seth runs and hides. I'm so curious to know what happened between them that Seth quit talking to Azrael after he left. Can't wait for next chapter!

Awesome...I love that Seth's hiding from Az. :) I can't wait for the next chapter.

haha like this chapter so the heir is finaaly here and seth going to go hide who cant wait for the next update

YAY! You're back! I've really missed Seth and Z. So far, I'm liking Intimacy. Please update again soon! I love Seth; he's just so adorable. Can't wait for the next chapter, which hopefully has scene(s) with Azrael and Seth.

It's great to see a new chapter. It'll be interesting to see how Seth interacts with the kids.