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by Aya

schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, po's getting a lot bolder huh. im sure tod will come crawling back when he cant make a go of it.
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, especially the humor. Is it Me or is Po possessive, especially about Lans privates. The last line is cute too. I'm glad to finally see some action, I was beginning to think you finally created a completely straight Sidhe.
person BabyVampy
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*laughing hard* stupidest .... *still laughing* that chapter was fantastic!!! *grin*

Thanks for sharing!
person kylee123
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Po is such a take charge type. I love his personality. I imagine he already feels that Lan belongs to him. I wonder when Lan will return the favor.
person BabyVampy
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Funniest line of chapter 13: "The new boyfriend said that he’d slap a bitch that didn’t hook the streets." I'm pretty sure I think it's hilarious because a kid said it.

Another funny bit was Lan threatening Bren.

And that ending is just evil! Especially since I'm not sure if Lan will step up to the plate. *laughing*

*grin* Thanks for sharing!
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, that poor kid. there's gotta be something they can do for him. that's so NOT cool.
person Suryallee
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi^^
I wasn't online for months. Had to go to the clinic and to have them do work on my eyes...wasn't fun, I can tell you. And it isn't even the end of it. I will have to go again in the next summer, to get me a new cornea in the left eye, my old one is done for, sadly.
I loved this story^^ I can finally read with one eye again, oh happy day!
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that doesn't sound at all promising. Seizures are never on the good thing list.
person kylee123
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update Ayato. Po sensed that something was about to go wrong in the house. I wonder what is wrong with Bren that could be causing seizures. It is kind of a reflection of how unstable things are. Plus all the brothers are due to be coming home and Po might not be welcome anymore. I already feel sorry for the poor nephew sneaking around trying to find food. I can't wait to see what happens next with this family.
person BabyVampy/NightShadeGhost
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this story! I just keep waiting to see what Po or Lan are going to do next.

I just love your writing style, storylines, and characters.

Thank you so much for sharing your writing!

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