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by Aya

schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I get Tod, he's cruel and he's not the most intelligent in the bunch. I don't get why Bren let him beat up Lan, is it because he knew Po's reaction, or that Lan knew better than to shoot his mouth off and knew he couldn't gain authority without a distraction? The other two, are they also brothers? Anyway I like them, they know how to make Po blush.
person DNight
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
woot lan came out maybe not Po can finally get gome action *,..,* ty Ayato-sama as always for you wonderful wrighting
person kylee123
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter Ayato. I hope you are doing okay. Ella is awesome. She knows how to push Bren in the right direction. I hope she tortures Bren to death by not sleeping with him!
person DT
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lan's screwed.
person kylee123
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How cute! Poor Lan must be wondering if he is a kitten for Po. It seems that Po is definitely very protective of Lan. I feel that he is probably trying to help out so he can get on Bren's good side and also take some of the pressure off Lan. Po truly must be getting pretty horny. He has not been getting any reciprocal action from Lan in the lovemaking department. I know that Lan is nervous about his family finding out. Maybe they could go fool around in the woods or something. anyway, I love the story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*bouncing* Another chapter! Yay!!! I was getting worred about you, cause you usually update at the very least once a week, and it'd been almost two weeks since I'd seen an update on any of the stories.

Love that Po got mad and Lan!

*grin*

Thanks for sharing!
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the story but please you're killing me with the long drawn out suspense. Lan and Po really need to hook up don't you think?
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(゜◇゜)
person kylee123
schedule February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter Ayato. I dislike Bren so much. Now he is going to try to put Po to work after treating him so badly all this time. He has no morals. I kind of wish that Lan would just take Po and leave. I wonder where they are going to put Po when the brothers come home. I can't wait for the next update.
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh,why do you do this to me? I wait so long and you leave me with questions! Is Po mad because he does understand and is upset? I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I love your writing and can't wait for an update!