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Interesting....
I admit, I'm getting a kick out of Po, and it will be fun to read the developments, like Lan bringing his family out of their monetary troubles. (Not to mention how much I'm anticipating seeing Tod get his ass kicked. But that's probably because I'm no little bit fond of chaos and conflict myself.)
Looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

3 things I really want to know:
-what does te mean?
-what happened with Lans's uncle
-what was Po trying to say?

Love that last line description of te

lol lan the pack to Po?

not sure if that even needs translation really.
but i might be wrong :)
either way Lan has a good one in Po.
and I hope he saves his family

oh i loved this
it makes my inner ravenclaw go EEP
and sigh with pleasure.
It like crossing hairs
sewing weaving in and out
fixing and mending.
ya.. man i adore this.
its the same feeling as shopping

Maybe because he now has to write more than one? Lol.

This...was just amazingly good to read. I love all the characters, really.

i love lan and po
but i went lalalalla
when the mom started talking
please continue this

It makes me mad that Bren is suddenly interested in gaining advantage from the relationship between Lan and Po. Lan and Po are already developing a relationship naturally and it seems artificial for anyone in the family to try to interfere. It seems strange that Po is attracted to Lan if he usually wants a more dominant type of lover, because he is not really going to get that from Lan. I think Bren should be off trying to get into Ella's good books instead of interfering with the developing relationship between Lan and Po. It feels like he is trying to whore out his brother.

Poor Lan. Is there no privacy in that house? I was kinda hoping that the shower would have disguised the noise a little. It sounds like everyone else is just jealous. Thanks for the smex scene. I hope we get to see another chapter soon. Happy writing!