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for The Red Priests

by InnerDemon

person ILoveWyatt
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much!
person blue_eyre
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good Fic. HOT!!!
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, kinky ja. still, if they only take the strongest and the brightest... doesn't that mean only the weaker stupid people are breeding and if that's so, won't that deplete their base stock?
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooo this is really good. u've got my attention. i wonder wat the purpose of transforming the ppl to wolves r for. is on a whim or is there more to it. this world of urs is interesting. i'd love to read more.
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Something I look for but rarely find, a nice one or two chapter story!

I liked the way yours had me really wondering what was next, where did these red priests take these people? I liked the dubious consent and roughness, and I really liked that all those people who feared the priests and had everyone worried so much - were actually happy. Depraved maybe, but happy. There's worse things than having sex all day.

Your use of wolves seemed correct, that is the plural of wolf. Wolfs is not a word, it needs a mark before the s to makes it possesive. Something that belongs to a particular wolf, such as the grey wolf's paw.

Thanks. I enjoyed.