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Another good chapter. I myself find it funny when Aaron gets told off. "You have lost him, I have found him, finders keepers loosers weepers....." That was funny. At least in my opinion. And I'm glad He's not going to stick around with Aaron after all once a cheater always a cheater.

(P.s: You might get more reviews if you allow annonymos reviews...Just sayin)

CrimsonWatersAlien

Aw man.......... to be frankly honest I really........ Really don't want Henry hurt. Luke needs some serious professional help. And Luke's father should've been in prison. Man that's just sad. I'm sure if Luke's mom knew she'd *bleep bleep bleep bleepity bleep* to that disgusting guy...... (so mad can't say his name..)

CrimsonWatersAlien

Okay had a longer review written but for some reason didn't go through. Loved the chapter though the fact that the pov wasn't stated, I kept getting confused when it switched and had to think a minute to get it. I liked this story very much though and hope you keep writing more. I kind of felt sorry for Luke in this one and I really hope he reconsiders trying to hurt Henry.

hmmm.......... This is a very interesting start making me wonder more about who Michael is. I've read the first chapter and Now I'm intriged. I think you are a very good writer C:

CrimsonWatersAlien

This chapter was interesting as well. A few mistakes but not enough to distract from the story! I love the rain for the same reason Henry does. It's wonderful and clensing, unless its a blown out wind blowing madly rain poiring down like sharp knifes kind of storm. Anyway's it sound like fate for both of them to meet and I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Hahahahah LOL! That was a funny ending for the story. Poor erik is going to have to take care of that.

Still an interesting story. I hope that you continue to update C: I have rated your story and reviewed all the chapters and waiting for more.

Um........ is micheals son going to get togethere with depressed Henry? You've already hented to the sexual tension Eric feels. Or maybe that's just one sided.

Well anyhow I'm going to wait for your next chapter.

CrimsonWatersAlien

I like this story a lot. It has a very nice ... ring to it. I am not sure if you meant it this way, with one of the characters being a writer and all, but, in my eyes and ears, the words seem to have a highly poetic/romantic feeling and aspect. Perhaps it's because of the sentence structure, but most of the time, I couldn't decide if I was reading prose or poetry - it was a very nice feeling, one that I deeply enjoyed. Thank you and keep up the good work. I am eager to read more.