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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
kind of short....but good. hope your other story will be longer. :)
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November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Angel Excellent thats all i gotta say keep up the good work
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it keep going.
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update update update.
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked. mucho gusto! I saw typos (you were hitting the 'k' instead of 'j' for jeep) you're so making me hooked on this story, it's not funny.
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September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I mean no disrespect, but you need to lay off the bold. I nearly didn't read it which would have been a shame cause it really seems to be the beginning of a good story. I would like to see more of it (minus the mega bold font) ^^
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September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just to get it out of the way: Thank you for taking the advice.
I like the pace this story's going at, as well as the development of the characters, thus far. I'm slightly impatient to see more from you at this point. I kinda feel like I want to see more depth in the characters now though ^^
I like the pace this story's going at, as well as the development of the characters, thus far. I'm slightly impatient to see more from you at this point. I kinda feel like I want to see more depth in the characters now though ^^