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by Aya

person “Out mi'balls?”
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is so funny ive read so many times and it never fails to crack me up
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it "ass-babies" are exactly what I called them in a review response, that is so great! Love the story.
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like your Sidhe stories, their culture is really fascinating. I hope there will be another update for this one, because I would really like to know what happenes with Noh and Wow.
person kylee123
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a lot of detail in this chapter. Sidhe relationships are so hard to figure out. At least Noh doesn't seem to mind having this snake guy around so much. I feel like I have heard the name Aniege before but I can't place it. I cant wait to find out who she is. Thanks for the update.
person kylee123
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a shock that Noh could have still died from that wasting disease. I am surprised that no one else in his home tree realized that it was so serious. I laughed when I heard about the Sidhe eating their animal hybrid cousins. I hope they don't develop that disease that cannibals sometimes develop like kuru or mad cow disease. I guess the Sidhe have extra strong constitutions. I feel sorry for Wow and his survival instinct. I am glad Noh still wants him. I hope they can establish some trust in their relationship.
person kylee123
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems like everytime Noh goes unconscious, Wow starts sleeping around. It is kind of gross because it feels disloyal. I don't really understand what kind of mind game he is playing. Wow seems to care about Noh but I don't know why Noh would still be attracted to him when he is always whoring himself out? Very interesting twist in the story.
person kylee123
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow is a bit of a temperamental character. I was just admiring how well the big male took care of Noh on the journey, and next thing Wow is having sex with the big male and then storming off without as much as a thank you. I feel like Wow was kind of overreacting considering all the help that they got from him and the fact that Noh was still sick. Maybe the sex had something to do with it. Any way I hope they will be okay on their own. They are a crazy couple. They are starting to remind me of Bonnie and Clyde.
person kylee123
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How is Noh's father going to react when he discovers that his son is gone? I am sad that they had to leave their home but I am excited for their new adventure. I hope the trip will not be too hard on Noh in his weak state, and hopefully wow will become stronger and more powerful along the way.
person kylee123
schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the update. I love when Noh and wow are together. wow is such a perfect little kitty and Noh keeps thinking the wrong thing but doing the right thing. They are great together. I wanted to point out a typo. In chapter 4 when Noh fights with the three men who are harassing Wow, you start by saying that he saw two males (instead of three) backing Wow against the wall :

What Noh walked into was two strange males, from another tribe, backing the little one, Wow, against the end of the hall.
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, just like I loved your other story Little Slave! (^_^)