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by dindind9

person Anon
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very intense and in the moment. Hate how you don't know who the person is but domineering is quite nice. "You'll never leave me. Wherever you run, I'll find you." It's exactly what everyone secretly wants to here. You should write more. Explore more.
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
muy bueno, alucinante, espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but I couldn't even read the story because everything was all smooshed together. Could you please break it up into paragraphs?