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Interesting, silly Zin always worrying for the oddest reasons.

Why does Zin want everyone to know about him and Surf? Is he feeling guilty?

I can see where Surf would find it weird; people may think he's just "going thru the brothers". lol

And I'm glad Zin has no intention of the band breaking up; that's good news! :)

I like where the story wants to take you. Listen to your muse. Don't
let lack of reviews stop you. You have to write for yourself sometimes.

Hey, sorry, I haven't looked at your blog yet. Remember, I'm the homework police; I'm lucky I can even read this! lol

What soundtrack were you talking about?

I liked this chapter b/c it did bring some closure to some situations. I'm glad Zin and El aren't fighting anymore. Even if they're not back to where they were, hopefully they're on their way.

And I totally see Surf and Alan together; actually I see Alan falling for Surf first. After all, Surf is the only one who Alan feels comfortable talking to. And I think Alan has taught Surf to calm down a bit and not be so hyper.

Anyway, great chapter! :)

Good, glad to hear more chapters to come:)

Definitely need more chapters:)

This was the best chapter yet! It's true that it could have gone down a lot worse than it did, but thankfully El's anger abated and he was able to embrace Zin.

I'm actually glad Alan wound up in the hospital; somewhere where he could really get help.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Wow, what a depressing chapter! :(

Ok, so El and Zin had an argument; a disagreement. So Zin's gonna break up with him over that? And why wouldn't Zin confront El and Surf if he thinks they're screwing behind his back? Why is he so stubborn?

And poor Alan; he loves the stage but lives his life in a state of panic. That's horrible.

I hope they straighten up their act before the next show.

Ok, so now things are a little clearer. But why did Zin and Surf's relationship end? So they went back to the bar to watch Alan ride the bull or w/e he was doing. What did that have anything to do with their relationship? Why couldn't it continue? And why didn't they want anyone else to know about it?

And when and how did Zin and El's relationship start? How long after Surf? Was Surf upset? Was Surf in love with Zin? And if so, why did he let him go?

I can understand Zin's jealousy seeing his b/f spending so much time with Surf, but he really needs to trust him not to do anything. Just b/c HE did stuff with Surf in bathrooms, doesn't mean everyone will. lol And plus El explained to Zin that they were both helping Alan. Isn't Alan Zin's brother? Why didn't he question it when El said something was wrong with Alan? Alan was in the bathroom with them, what the hell is wrong with Zin?

What a mess! lol And no, I didn't get your email. I woulda emailed you back thanking you for it! haha Could you re-send it? Thx! :)

As always, looking forward to more. Oh, I probably mentioned this, in fact I'm pretty sure I did: why doesn't Alan go oon Prozac or something to help him with his panic/anxiety attacks? He doesn't have to quit doing something he loves if he can get these attacks under control. Sometimes people need more than just their mind to help them. Meds work wonders. lol

I like the drama, more please. A little betaing for the chapters may be needed, but overall is great