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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Puhh, thank god nothing has happened to Ryo...for now.
But I`m really sad, that he has given up and that he understates his situation. Brennan is so cruel, first he confirms him that he will die
sooner or later (fuck the point that his death will be
quick and easy), next minute he forces himself on Ryo again.
And Ryo may not realize it, but Brennan has him wrapped around his little finger, yeah I know, Stockholm syndrome much.
So it`s Blainns task to bond with Ryo, in order to get secret informations from him???I hope Blainn is going to cure him
from his resignation. What about the pill Brennan dropped? I hope it`s not poison!
And which proof?I`m really curious...:)
Greetings, Jules
But I`m really sad, that he has given up and that he understates his situation. Brennan is so cruel, first he confirms him that he will die
sooner or later (fuck the point that his death will be
quick and easy), next minute he forces himself on Ryo again.
And Ryo may not realize it, but Brennan has him wrapped around his little finger, yeah I know, Stockholm syndrome much.
So it`s Blainns task to bond with Ryo, in order to get secret informations from him???I hope Blainn is going to cure him
from his resignation. What about the pill Brennan dropped? I hope it`s not poison!
And which proof?I`m really curious...:)
Greetings, Jules
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't say RTTS ever gets boring. Every new update totally makes my day :)
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November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, aren't I glad I clicked this story! Normally, I balk at Stockholm Syndrome stories because they tend to be rather unrealistic. However, your story captured my attention. You do a fantastic job of writing from a limited-third person perspective and you develop Ryo's syndrome well. The last few lines of this chapter really hit me. They did well summing up what Stockholm Syndrome basically is. Fantastic job and I can't wait for more
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ommggg poor little guy. i want to hug him.
if he died of a heart attack or heart failure from all these panic attacks i'm gonna kill brennan then blow up his little HQ.
what a depressed little guy. i enjoyed this chapter! can't wait to see what awaits him in the tiled room.
if he died of a heart attack or heart failure from all these panic attacks i'm gonna kill brennan then blow up his little HQ.
what a depressed little guy. i enjoyed this chapter! can't wait to see what awaits him in the tiled room.
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
btw for such a good story involving kidnap (which is popular on aff) i scratch my head why you don't have more reviews! you should mention kidnapping in your summary and the fetish people will flock like bees to honey. some people aren't smart enough to figure out what you mean by Stockholm in the story title.
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think ommgg is right.
I thought about your story all day long.
It`s awesome and still you have so few reviews. I would advise you to change the summary too.
You should mention the kidnapping,the syndrome, Ryos fear of dying and maybe the twisted relationship.
I wouldn`t change the title,it`s really smart, but like ommgg said, most people will think this story is about
Stockholm (Sweden)not about the syndrome, when they read the summary.
But even if you don`t change it, I will follow your story for sure and I will review every knew chapter!!!:)
Greetings, Jules
I thought about your story all day long.
It`s awesome and still you have so few reviews. I would advise you to change the summary too.
You should mention the kidnapping,the syndrome, Ryos fear of dying and maybe the twisted relationship.
I wouldn`t change the title,it`s really smart, but like ommgg said, most people will think this story is about
Stockholm (Sweden)not about the syndrome, when they read the summary.
But even if you don`t change it, I will follow your story for sure and I will review every knew chapter!!!:)
Greetings, Jules
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot, you should post it in the slash-section!!!
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can`t find the words to express how much I love your story...:)
I just discovered it yesterday and now I`m really hooked, because it`s not your
usual kidnapping story, where the victim falls for his captor after one day or vice versa.
I can feel Ryo`s pain and his fear, not knowing if this is the last minute or day of your life.
My heart`s beating faster every time Ryo has a panic attack.
Brennan sure is cruel but also intriguing and intimidating as hell. He tantalises Ryo in the worst way, because he leaves him in the dark about his intentions and he shows no feelings.
No wonder Ryo thinks that he`s going to die soon.
Please update soon, I want to know whats going to happen to him in this room.
Oh, and I really love Blainn,he`s an awesome character.
Greetings, Jules
I just discovered it yesterday and now I`m really hooked, because it`s not your
usual kidnapping story, where the victim falls for his captor after one day or vice versa.
I can feel Ryo`s pain and his fear, not knowing if this is the last minute or day of your life.
My heart`s beating faster every time Ryo has a panic attack.
Brennan sure is cruel but also intriguing and intimidating as hell. He tantalises Ryo in the worst way, because he leaves him in the dark about his intentions and he shows no feelings.
No wonder Ryo thinks that he`s going to die soon.
Please update soon, I want to know whats going to happen to him in this room.
Oh, and I really love Blainn,he`s an awesome character.
Greetings, Jules
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just wanted to tell you that I LOVE your story! And I wasn't put off at all! :)
I can't wait for more actually! I wish you would tell a little more about Brennan... he's still pretty much a mystery lol :)
...for now it seams that Brennan would be a gentle lover! Was this a one time thing or does he plan to take Ryo gently most the time?
I like Brenndan but I can't wait to know of his motive... What does he want? Just sex?? Or something else out of Ryo???
Anyways I'll stick around for the answer ;D ehe
Thanks for the story!
I can't wait for more actually! I wish you would tell a little more about Brennan... he's still pretty much a mystery lol :)
...for now it seams that Brennan would be a gentle lover! Was this a one time thing or does he plan to take Ryo gently most the time?
I like Brenndan but I can't wait to know of his motive... What does he want? Just sex?? Or something else out of Ryo???
Anyways I'll stick around for the answer ;D ehe
Thanks for the story!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you had just enough of the sex scene. It wasn't off putting at all. I won't say it was the best I have read on here but it was very good for a first effort.