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YOU.ROCK.MY.WOOOOOORLD! IT'S 3:33 AM and i just finished this from start to last chapter..and i'm mad it stopped there = ( RyO is making ME feel doped up now...anywho luv everything everyone want more pls update soon!! Theres no way he would be able to make it on his own, that last moment between Rye And Bran was so cute!! I really do yhope you have more instore for these characters!! if there is anyway i can get an update pls let me know (i skipped A/N so i dont know if it was already stated)

also just realised the title is very fitting XD Ryo is too far gone now and bran needs to take responsibility lol

awww it's like, adopting a new sleepy puppy. he needs some psychiatric help. :P
i enjoyed the chapter!

poor guy eating stale food. it's amazing he isn't sick from it or anything. i wonder if any of his coworkers filed a missing persons report or something. you'd think there'd be one out after 1 month. maybe brennan's connections run deep though.

can't wait to see where this goes

just read chapter one and i liked it. onward...

woah, chap 2, pretty good. nervous.

this is fascinating! i just read all of this.
i cant wait to read more, even though i have no clue whats going on. who is brennan? what does he do?
lynn is blainns girlfriend?
again, i really liked the story so far. i found it understandable that blain had trouble going back to normal life... poor fella. but id be even more truamatized if i woke up back in my nightmare. i wonder how he going to take waking up back there? how the hell is hair white? interesting. is it just that sort of blonde?
well, you have gained a fan. i will definitely be checking for updates.

Great story. The characters are brilliant - especially Ryo. The portrayal of his thoughts, emotions, fears seems very believable and accurate (not that I have ever been kidnapped...). For me, he feels like a true person and not a fictional character what pretty much stands for how successful you were in creating him and building the world in the story. In addition, I can never predict what is going to happend next and it only makes me want to read more and more.

you totally could've trolled us with a "the end" at the end. lol

nice to see some development in his situation. can't wait to see how he copes or adjust to where ever he's being placed.

something important did happen i think ;D
ryo is learning more about himself in his situation

and brennan is an ass and he needs to give those kids something to do. like a coloring book even. man if i were ryo i'd be crazy already! XD

i enjoyed the chapter

the way you write ryo's panic attacks make me feel like he's gonna die any second XD maybe they're that good.

this is one heart pounding story, like wow, just wow, i want more,twisted as it is, it catches my attention...bad. The pace was so...calm so wrong but whoa it good.