rate_review Reviews

Wow. This story is amazing!! The character development and progression of the plot is the best I've read in a looooooong time. I really can't tell you which character I love more... seriously. Ryo, Blainn and Brennan all have such depth. And the tension - brilliant. You're an amazing writer and I'm so grateful you've shared this story. Thank you!!

still reading. its 1:45am (took a break to make dinner and wrap presents lol apparently took 4 hrs to wrap some damn presents) so not as eloquent in my reviewing skills. But i wanted to say more than 'loved it update please' It's such an interesting idea to see how someone would develop Stockholm syndrome. It gets my curious nature all excited. I'm truly looking forward how you take this forward although i will try to curb my need for eternal love and soulmate bonds as i read this thought provoking dive into human psychology.

You know how after you've read a bunch of summary's that sound so interesting and then lead to a crappy story whether it was because of bad plot ideas, no character development or seems to have been written by an 8th grader and not a smart one you stop reading past the summary unless you know the writer. Unless you are extremely bored you don't delve into the unknown. Well let's just say i was really bored but i am so glad i delved. This was one of the best first chapters i've read in a while. Thank you for that.

After the last chapter i went and double checked the warnings to make sure rape wasn't mentioned. I can't read rape.....please tell me there is no actual rape....

"If you don't need me anymore...?"...hehe, awesome...:)
Credits for Brennan, that he didn`t force him to more.
But Blainn is right, Ryo should hate him, confront him,scream and rage, I mean he
fucked up his whole life.
I really really really wanne take a look inside Brennans head. Does he feel something for
Ryo??? Oh , I wanne know so bad...:)
Blainn is really smart, love him for trying to open Ryo`s eyes!
Can`t wait to read more!!!

Greetings, Jules

wow. hes finally starting to get it... dude, clever idea with the bathroom. have you read 'muffin' on here, i totally recommend it.
i find myself glad that theres been an update... wondering if there will be a relationship between brennan and ry.................. but first he has to get better, healthy. you cant be dependent like that, its not good. youve gotta live ryo.
and im starting to wonder, ya know when blain says he likes the boss, cause bossman took him out of a bad life and gave him a better one... not the case for ryo, who blain says that he had a good life, and was taken from it. and thus, he should not like the bossman. but
but what if ryos life wasnt to great... so hes not homeless, or being abused, ... never mind, im rambling....

of now i remember, my though sorta trailed off...
but yeah, so what if ryo was lonely, before he was kidnapped and stuff. yea, lonely.

My profiles deleted???? Hmm, never thought to sign in, but I will in a moment and check everything is all right.
It shouldn't be. Sorry about that. I check AFF every day pretty much. I have no idea how its happened that my profiles been deleted.

Anywho, yes I am still reading. This is still superbly written and Ryo is, as whoever mentioned it before, one of the more realistic characters I have ever come across. You just have a way with words my dear. It makes me quite jealous.

Now, I am going to see what is up with my profile and shizzle, thank you for bringing it to my attention :)

i love this story, it brings a smile to my face every time i see a new chapter, so keep up the great work and i hope to read more very soon!!!!! :)

You are amazing. When Ryo goes through his panic attacks, I actually feel kinda nervous for him. It's sad to see how Ryo is coping after his kidnapping indecent, and I doubt going back will make him happy either >>; When Brennan decides to let Ryo stay it seems like he's talking about a poor puppy abandoned in the rain that Blainn picked up. Sometimes I seriously wonder what Brennan is thinking.
Love your story, can't wait to see more :)