AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Return Ticket To Stockholm

by attackegg

person oo
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! please, ryo, ask him why? "why do you want me?"
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely adore this story!
This is one of stories that capture your interest because of its unique approach and its delivery.
You are great situational writer, in that you drive the story with strong defined characters that set the scene with their very presence.
A great read which I have kept on my favourites and have come back to many times.

FM
person Aleks
schedule January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're here because you want to fuck me."
"Well," the guy conceded, "the thought had crossed my mind."
...hahahahhahhahahahaha....brilliant

wow almost a normal dialogue between these two!

person oo
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was crazy UNEXPECTED!
im so happy happy happy!
person fluffiebunny
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, although I really would like to find out who Brennan really is!!!
With that said, bring on the smut!!!! >:D
person oo
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that sorta sounded like an ending. is this complete?
glad ryo is finally getting on with life and moving forward.
i wonder what hes gonna do at school? whats his passion?
will he never see brennan again?
person Aleks
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Really original plot, nice long chapters and updates....

What more could I wish for? More long nice chapters! ;)
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
....when you said something we've all been waiting for..I assumed....XD Dirty mind! But anyway that's ok cus I KNOOW it can't end there for them and I'm pretty positive that Brennan is in loove...what mob boss would just spend money on setting you up with a good life for no reason, it's not out of obligation, so looove...plus every other thug/mob/gansta boss here always falls for the main character don't they ~_^ I ain't complaining though...just waiting for the...Dirty mind!!
person Jules
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OHHH:(, that really sounds final.Like he really doesn`t care at all
about Ryo. I guess that means no
happy end.Yeah I know this story isn`t supposed to end fluffy.But still...:)
But Blainn is right to interfere, he`s really trying to help Ryo and he`s thinking
of his future. I`m curious what he will do next to help him.
And know I`m off to read the chapter about Brennan:)
Greetings, Jules
person oo
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh no way!
want more WANT MORE.
*meep
please. soon. really soon.
i am so glad ryo is on the road to recovery! hope to see him venturing outside a bit, to get used to being out in populated areas and chaos.
and that overheard convo! holly molly! really? for a bit i was seriously thinking that brennan just didnt give a shit about ryo at all. apparently i was wrong... and blain too, though as a friend though.