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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Glad it wasn't a heart attack. And I'm actually glad he was high-ish when Brennan got to him. I'd like to think that he was glad the kid was high too.
This makes me wonder if Brennan is only intimidating him for show, you know, to be an actual creep so that Ryo feels like he has to submit or suffer something gruesome. That's why Ryo was so compliant when this went down. Poor Rye is so hopeless, and the grasp that Brennan has on his mind is so strong already, but it is so believable.
I can't help but wonder what the hell kind if insecurities Brennan has to make him think he needs to get people in bed. It's obvious that he is not a cruel lover, from Blain's account anyway, so why the hell can't he court court someone in a normal matter. I hope we get to go deeper into Brennan's brain.
Great job. That sex scene was miles better than most, and I prefer feelings vs description anyways.
Glad it wasn't a heart attack. And I'm actually glad he was high-ish when Brennan got to him. I'd like to think that he was glad the kid was high too.
This makes me wonder if Brennan is only intimidating him for show, you know, to be an actual creep so that Ryo feels like he has to submit or suffer something gruesome. That's why Ryo was so compliant when this went down. Poor Rye is so hopeless, and the grasp that Brennan has on his mind is so strong already, but it is so believable.
I can't help but wonder what the hell kind if insecurities Brennan has to make him think he needs to get people in bed. It's obvious that he is not a cruel lover, from Blain's account anyway, so why the hell can't he court court someone in a normal matter. I hope we get to go deeper into Brennan's brain.
Great job. That sex scene was miles better than most, and I prefer feelings vs description anyways.
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I remembered what I was thinking about! When Brennan calls Ryo "Mr. Tailor" I think of the bad guy in The Matrix who was always like "Mr. Anderson..." and it makes me giggle.
I wonder if Brennan is looking to replace Blain. He doesn't seem to really want anything with him, he's just doing it because he feels he owes him something, but Ryo, he had the hots for Brennan in the gas station, right? Brennan knows Ryo is gay. Does he think that he'll get Ryo to reciprocate? Ugh.
Now I'm just scared he's going to be chopped up, peirced, tattooed, or scarred or tortured or something now.
When Ryo has a panic attack, I find myself reading faster. My heart beats. I almost feel shaky like I'm in the story. Usually I can keep a certain level of detachment, but I can't. Great job doing that, by the way.
I wonder if Brennan is looking to replace Blain. He doesn't seem to really want anything with him, he's just doing it because he feels he owes him something, but Ryo, he had the hots for Brennan in the gas station, right? Brennan knows Ryo is gay. Does he think that he'll get Ryo to reciprocate? Ugh.
Now I'm just scared he's going to be chopped up, peirced, tattooed, or scarred or tortured or something now.
When Ryo has a panic attack, I find myself reading faster. My heart beats. I almost feel shaky like I'm in the story. Usually I can keep a certain level of detachment, but I can't. Great job doing that, by the way.
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know, I like this. I know I've said this a lot, but here is why:
Brennan isn't half bad. This isn't a story where the perpetrator is a sadistic freak. The fact that they didn't shove Ryo in a box or shackle him or torture and beat him shows miles about their characters. They have shown that they are capable of that, which is scary, but I'm finding myself wanting Ryo to just give it all up and kiss the guy already, and moan in his ear and touch while he's being touched because he's already coming up with reasons as to why it's okay. Hell. Moaning is is thing. At least it's not heavy bondage, humiliation, and other crap. Then I remember who Brennan is and I myself am kicking myself over even thinking this! He's the bad guy, damnit, but then he just promised he would make it quick for Ryo when the time came. Can it be if? Meh. I would almost enjoy the disappointment of an unhappy ending. I would hate to wish death on him, but I do not see him getting out at all.
I love the controversy. Now my brain is going crazy, analyzing and picking apart everything it can and I guess I don't mind.
Blain kills me. His remark about love turning up in strange places was so witty and charming.
This chapter is kind of melancholy. I don't know if you planned it this way, but his thoughts, when he talks to himself, it feels like he's tucking half of his mind away; letting it drag on like a cruise ship behind a tugboat, and the tugboat is reeling out the rope, and right in this chapter is when they cut all ties.
And fuck. I somewhat wonder if this is all one big psychological experiment at times.
Brennan isn't half bad. This isn't a story where the perpetrator is a sadistic freak. The fact that they didn't shove Ryo in a box or shackle him or torture and beat him shows miles about their characters. They have shown that they are capable of that, which is scary, but I'm finding myself wanting Ryo to just give it all up and kiss the guy already, and moan in his ear and touch while he's being touched because he's already coming up with reasons as to why it's okay. Hell. Moaning is is thing. At least it's not heavy bondage, humiliation, and other crap. Then I remember who Brennan is and I myself am kicking myself over even thinking this! He's the bad guy, damnit, but then he just promised he would make it quick for Ryo when the time came. Can it be if? Meh. I would almost enjoy the disappointment of an unhappy ending. I would hate to wish death on him, but I do not see him getting out at all.
I love the controversy. Now my brain is going crazy, analyzing and picking apart everything it can and I guess I don't mind.
Blain kills me. His remark about love turning up in strange places was so witty and charming.
This chapter is kind of melancholy. I don't know if you planned it this way, but his thoughts, when he talks to himself, it feels like he's tucking half of his mind away; letting it drag on like a cruise ship behind a tugboat, and the tugboat is reeling out the rope, and right in this chapter is when they cut all ties.
And fuck. I somewhat wonder if this is all one big psychological experiment at times.
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February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story right here has got my heart pounding. Like shit. Your descriptions of Rye panicking are so real I swear I'm like panicking too. And then the sexual tension...geez! Anyways, I am looking out for the next chapter!!
Btw, I hope that life outside of this site is treating you like a Queen!! Stay healthy and happy :)
Btw, I hope that life outside of this site is treating you like a Queen!! Stay healthy and happy :)
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February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just read through this and I love it. I've always had a thing for Stockholm syndrome and power dynamics, but unfortunatly it's rare to see it being handled well. You totally nailed it though. To often in stories the protagonist falls to quickly, just gives up and falls madly inlove because they've been captured by someone with a pretty face and their thought patterns are never acknowledged as dysfunctional by themselves or others. I was so happy when I realised that was not how it was going to go down in this story.
Great job author from a new reader.
Great job author from a new reader.
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February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i lol'd at that smut comment....
heh i enjoyed the chapter! gosh he's so clueless. i want to give him a knock on the head.
heh i enjoyed the chapter! gosh he's so clueless. i want to give him a knock on the head.
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AAAHH!! I can't believe you just did that to me!?!?! NNUUUoo why whyw hwy did you end it right THERE!!! I'm literally dying here (ok... not literally)...can't breath. ~sigh~ oh man I luv u...not literally on that part...But I swear anything I could/would say right now would just sound really creepy...>_> even though completely innocent. Ok anywaay I luv u I luv this chapter I love freakin RYO (though a bit dense at the moment...is anyone else saying "duh"?)I love brennan (hehe ~_^ he so bad ~dirty thoughts~ makes me love him more...I know ur secret Brennie) and though I love you...U BETTER POST NEW CHAPTER FAST! my heart is weak you know? = [ hmm I'm gunna reread this untill you do! MAN I love, u ur the greatest! Ok I'm going to leave u alone now...it's getting strange again... (Psst it's 1:15 and I have work tomorrow -_- but I just had too)
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh he owns him ( I was there was a smiley for sketchy face...)he owns him all right just not the way his thinking hehehe I can see this ending veery well for them. Veeerrry weell...damn just got creepy again (cringes) I dont know when I got into the habit of typing out expressions...
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, what an evil cliffhanger.......!!!
I think I´m ill, almost the whole chapter I was thinking....do it do it....sexy mobster wants you do it.....yeah I´m definitely ill.... in the head... :)
-it´s your story - so it´s your fault....waiting for more
I think I´m ill, almost the whole chapter I was thinking....do it do it....sexy mobster wants you do it.....yeah I´m definitely ill.... in the head... :)
-it´s your story - so it´s your fault....waiting for more
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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really did not think this could get any more intense - but it has - Brennan still playing games, to get what he wants (sex), and traumatising poor Ryo in the process.
The truth is Ryo knows exactly what Brennan is doing; still extrapolating on the Stockholm syndrome in order to try and coax him in to doing what he wants with mortality still looming over his head. And Ryo is still powerless to put up a valiant fight against him.
I really don't think this will end well for either of them!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!