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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good story :) i feel like i should eat something when i read it XD
i started reading because i saw your rec list - so good, i enjoyed those stories too!
i like your character's thoughts. sometimes he gets a little funny (like thinking about how blood should splatter after the other guy came back; that was enjoyable to read). XD i'm only up to chapter 4 but if i were him i'd probably go crazy and depressed if i were locked up like that with nothing to do. lol
good work!
i started reading because i saw your rec list - so good, i enjoyed those stories too!
i like your character's thoughts. sometimes he gets a little funny (like thinking about how blood should splatter after the other guy came back; that was enjoyable to read). XD i'm only up to chapter 4 but if i were him i'd probably go crazy and depressed if i were locked up like that with nothing to do. lol
good work!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just read the sex scene. I'm not bothered at all. actually i thought it was refreshing because the usual sex scenes people write are generic and boring. it's good to get some of the character's thoughts too in these types of scenes, especially if their minds are in overdrive not just about the sex but about the act or idea of it. i enjoyed the chapter!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't change a thing- I like Ryo the way he is. Easy to understand and sympathise with. Can't wait for more :)
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi I am enjoying the story. No Ryo is not to pathetic or wimpy. You might want to consider not requiring people to log in in order to review,