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by raycheld20

schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT story i am definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes keep up the good work
person Ash bunnii (cutegirl12356)
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMFG i read it and i was crying and laughing and you are just amazing :)! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
person Manda
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Phew! *fans herself* That was steamy! I think it's so sweet that he's told her that he loves her! I just hope that it doesn't freak her out or anything... I'm a little surprised that Devon wasn't a virgin, but he IS almost 18 so I shouldn't be. Does that mean he's had a girlfriend before? Hmmm cant wait for the next chapter!
person Likara
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's a great story! I really like it... I hope you update soon. I mean you can't just end the chapter here... I really want to see her reaction!
person am_sr
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
muy bueno, con mucho tacto el encuentro sexual de los dos, espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria
person am_sr
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
que puedo decir mas que alucinante y hermosa,muy bien escrito al igual que los personajes de esta historia, no veo la hora que que tengan relaciones sexuales, que va a estar muy bien escrito, la actualizacion muy pronto, ana maria
person Manda
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How sad :( I don't see how anyone could give birth to a child and hate it so much! What ever happened to her father? I hope he didn't just run off...
person Manda
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Lettie :( I know it happens, but it's hard for me to believe that kids get abused like that! :( I absolutely adore that Devon is a little younger than Lettie and so mature for his age :) I really hope you continue this story, I'm really interested in seeing where it goes :)
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hermosa y muy triste por liette, pobre chica, ama a su madre y ella es una mal perra, espero que muy pronto levantes nuevos capitulos, voy a esperar con muchisima ansiedad. ana maria

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