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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Although there was a lot more character/plot development than I anticipated your writing style is quite good.
I read all four chapters of build up only to be left short of any real interaction between your two main characters.
I sincerely hope that you intend to finish this.
I read all four chapters of build up only to be left short of any real interaction between your two main characters.
I sincerely hope that you intend to finish this.