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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Greetings!
I really enjoyed this chapter (eight.) The characters are growing wonderfully, the world expanding and plot engaging. So is Talten just crazy because of drugs you mentioned or is it him? He reminds me of certain ceasers in history that are just crazy. :) I like it. I was sad to come to the end of the chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Happy writing,
C. Reed
I really enjoyed this chapter (eight.) The characters are growing wonderfully, the world expanding and plot engaging. So is Talten just crazy because of drugs you mentioned or is it him? He reminds me of certain ceasers in history that are just crazy. :) I like it. I was sad to come to the end of the chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Happy writing,
C. Reed
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September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*snickers. gives a whole new meaning to pillow biting, neh?
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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a fabulously feisty bunch of characters!!! So much attitude around one dining room table!! Bring on more chapters, i want more Yeom!!!
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3-5. Woot! I'm loving where this story is going. Definitely looking forward to how this will progress and how the end will conclude. Love how Elt works and considering that this is a world of its own separate from the Lover's Universe, this world will work well on it's own as well. After 'Star Child' I would love the continuation of this tale. Thanks for the updates and I hope to read more!
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
intrigue-ing. emphesis on the intrigue. it'll be interesting to see where this goes.
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I get the feeling that while Leo may be spanking Yeom's ass now, Leo will be submitting to Yeom in the end!! (well that's what i'm hoping!!)
Great start, looking forward to seeing where this tale goes!!
Great start, looking forward to seeing where this tale goes!!
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September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Greetings!
I like it so far. It has me wanting more and I am very curious about this world. Is it ours, but after a devastating war? Or is it a completely different planet? Is Yeom a Que or a Queen? Right now I am thinking Queen, because he is technically a different race and he doesn't seem magical. And he also gives off an air of being royalty. I can't wait to hear his story.
The characters are interesting. I like Mal so far and I think he'll make a good companion (not romantically) to Leo. I also want to see what happens when Leo and Talten see each other again.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Happy writing,
C. Reed
I like it so far. It has me wanting more and I am very curious about this world. Is it ours, but after a devastating war? Or is it a completely different planet? Is Yeom a Que or a Queen? Right now I am thinking Queen, because he is technically a different race and he doesn't seem magical. And he also gives off an air of being royalty. I can't wait to hear his story.
The characters are interesting. I like Mal so far and I think he'll make a good companion (not romantically) to Leo. I also want to see what happens when Leo and Talten see each other again.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Happy writing,
C. Reed
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-2. i've taken to Elt and Leo. two trouble makers tat knows how much to bend the rules without breaking them. now Mal, whoo, what a little warrior. i am extremely curious about the person who fell from the sky in chapter one that was later mentioned in chapter two. greatly anticipating the next update and other six or so chappies that you've already written. thanks so much for ur hard work and greatly appreciate your stories.
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there - long time reader, first time reviewer. I think I quite like where your going with this, not as much as I like some of your other work but that's a personal preference... Keep up the good work.