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by Aya

person kylee123
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I have been reading Star Child all of this week. Does Pyanna realize that Mal is the one who is interested in being her warrior. I wonder if she will wait for a 12 year old to grow up. Talten's new fiancee is creepy. Leo is interesting because he is a mature warrior but I feel like he needs to be rescued. I wonder if Yeom is the person who will rescue him. I would love to see more of their growing relationship. I get the feeling that Leo is playing dominant when he is really more of a submissive. I would love to see Yeom tie him up.
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 14. wooo i like Ara. she's got spunk in a graceful way. i can't wait to see wat happens!
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 12. oooo i want to meet her!
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13. i was hoping t meet the well behaved lady this chapter and the disappointment in that was cured with Leo's tumble with Mal. love the history lession though and it's tempting for me to attempt putting a tree together for the various ranks. now that would be a nice visual.
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11. woot! love how Talten can be creepy and Leo can be so caring in all the right places. i'm loving Mal even more. thanks for the update! greatly appreciate it and i hope to read more from you soon!
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
one shot of hard love making between Yoem, Leo and Elt! wat in the world would they have done to get into such a threesome? the circumstances that would lead to it and the results afterwards are gonna be interesting. thanks so much for the update! seeing Leo receive was very...... arousing. XD
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD i'm loving Mal! and Yoem's hidden aggressiveness. if Leo doesn't get topped by Yoem in Star Child, considering tat you've finished it, i want a one-shot of that happening! :DDD thanks for your updates and i'll definitely take a look at Cuddles.
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay for pleasure, it helps you connect.
person CocoReed
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 is interesting. :) I like Leo and Yeom's interaction and their growing relationship. I'm still curious about him and why he's there and all. I wanna know who he really is and what that'll mean for Leo. Keep up the good work!

Happy writing,

C. Reed
person maynerd
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
getting more and more into this story with each new chapter