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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't agree with you that the story is worse or less popular that your other ones. Personally I like it much better because I enjoy stories about angels and demons. It's more fantasy than science-fiction so it has a slighty diffrent "taget group". Characters are realistic and world-building is very solid so I enjoy every new chapter. Good work.
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing and finish interesting cool story
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6. oooo i like matthew. he reminds me of my brother.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I tried really hard to read this story because I've read some of your other works, but I don't think I can make myself enjoy it anymore. I find the world very interesting, and the characters, too, have the potential for greatness. However, I'm finding the delivery really dry and tedious. It's hard to balance what you want readers to know alongside what they're actually interested in reading. As an author, sometimes you want to stuff all the fascinating facets of a world and its characters into your readers and make them understand how much depth there is to your vision. It's important to pace yourself and reign in your scope and focus more on the flow of each individual chapter, however.
Best of luck with your stories now and in the future!
Best of luck with your stories now and in the future!
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October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4-5. woot! i'm all caught up! now i'm certainly curious as to whether or not Lian did betray his Lord and that was how he got into Hell. the characters are moving on their own now in this story and i'm waiting excitedly on how all this will fold out. thanks for the hard work in bringing us your updates! greatly appreciate it~
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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE the world you are building. I'm not a religious person myself but i am really enjoying the religious aspect of this story - its all romance and beauty and power. I look forward to next Sunday's installment!!!
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1! woot! luving Hellian. i like the way you got this chapter out without telling us the lord and the guy's name. XD only read 1 name and it was Lil's. awesome way to start the Hellian and i couldn't help and laughed at how the lord thought the guy was his fantasy and it took the guy about a month to materialize. this is extremely interesting and i hope to read a new chapter from you soon! thanks a bunch and have a good 2 wks rest! greatly appreciated!