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February 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I kind of like it. not like your usual work but fun. i enjoy your character development. xo
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i'm in love whit this story, is grate please write more. i love your story
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"No point in trying if everybody is going to be a jerk about it?" Are we talking about artists or writers here? Keep trying because there are a select few who love your work even though we may not say it often enough. Thanks for continuing with Hellian. I would like to see its completion and other stories from this world!
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January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't read this before, but now I have. And I have to say that, considering how my family is so mixed with our religions and/or lack thereof, I don't see any problem with the way you present this, nor the amount of religion in it. It's not like you're trying to convert anyone with it.
Frankly, I'm enjoying this. It's a different take on religion, and - though I wouldn't enjoy it if it were, say, in lecture form - the way you've woven the beliefs into the tale and the relationships has made this a wonderful read.
I had more that I was going to say, but now I can't remember it.
Oh. And there are several times you have 'least' throughout the story where I think you might mean 'lest' instead. I'm tired and PMS-y, so maybe I'm not thinking straight, but it seemed like there was a bit of a mix-up with those. *shrug*
Anyway, I got distracted and lost my train of thought (I'm sorry!), so I haven't any more words of praise for you just now. D:
I'm looking forward to reading more, though. :D
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
Frankly, I'm enjoying this. It's a different take on religion, and - though I wouldn't enjoy it if it were, say, in lecture form - the way you've woven the beliefs into the tale and the relationships has made this a wonderful read.
I had more that I was going to say, but now I can't remember it.
Oh. And there are several times you have 'least' throughout the story where I think you might mean 'lest' instead. I'm tired and PMS-y, so maybe I'm not thinking straight, but it seemed like there was a bit of a mix-up with those. *shrug*
Anyway, I got distracted and lost my train of thought (I'm sorry!), so I haven't any more words of praise for you just now. D:
I'm looking forward to reading more, though. :D
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
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January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story
The elements of mystery that you have created within the time line are great. It makes for a really interesting read. I also love the interaction between your characters, they don't react like the cliche couples. I hope you up date this more often.
The elements of mystery that you have created within the time line are great. It makes for a really interesting read. I also love the interaction between your characters, they don't react like the cliche couples. I hope you up date this more often.
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December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is very dry reading. how to's, have more motovation in them but this is just forced gooble dee gook thats being churned out.Maybe laying off the sleeping pills while typing this up may help liven it up some.
Point blank it sucks, its a snore fest. Compared to the others, just drop this to the way side and let it go.
Point blank it sucks, its a snore fest. Compared to the others, just drop this to the way side and let it go.
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 12. HAH! i love the fight between Greg and Ralph. this whole chapter made my day. thankies for the update! n i hope to read more from you soon. :DD
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap 9-10. more more! thanks so much for the update! keep up the hard work!
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October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story, can't wait to read more
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 7-8. wooo i like Elizabeth's sharp tongue. haha tat's awesome how the angels lost the Lord. now where could the Lord of Host be hiding? thanks for the udpate! i hope to read more from u.