rate_review Reviews

i think this story is off to a great start, i really really like it and i hope there is more to come really sooon!!!

it's an interesting beginning. I like the fact that gods in this story neither are good nor bad. Update soon ;)

I like the idea so far, it's interesting and a refreshing departure from the usual plot. You seem to have an excellent grasp of writing mechanics, but I do have one minor piece of advice; watch out for repetition of words in the same sentence. Just read it out loud and you will know what I mean. I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work.