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by LovelyLotus

person Pearl
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

Liked your story it is one of the best on this sight.
Too bad you didn't finish it.
Half the problem with writers is that they don't finish.

good luck!
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Did you give up on this story? I was very interested but I see you haven't updated in a while. I'd like to see how it turns out though!
*Also please note that the paragraphs and spacing as they currently appear are very difficult to read.*
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm normally into slash and I wouldn't have found this story had it not been for your review on my story. *bows* which I thank you very much for. I've read the first chapter and it does sound interesting. So I will continue reading on. I wonder why her mother wouldn't just explain everything to her. Once again thanks for your review and I will continue to read your story to see if I like it. C: Sounds good so far!

CrimsonWatersAlien
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eh...... okay then. Well I think it's interesting and all but after reading it I realize that nope its not my cup of tea. I don't want to offend you because I did like your writing style I'm just more of a slashy person. *bows low* I hope you'll forgive me. I hope you write more stories. Do you write slash? Just wondering because you do have a great writing style. But stories like these aren't my cup of tea.

Great job writing it though C:

CrimsonWatersAlien
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story line! I was wondering if you would allow me to rewrite this story. I enjoy the characters, and wish to flesh out the plot line more. I wouldn't claim it to be mine in anyway when I post it, the credit would be yours. When you get a chance, please send me an email at codenamejaunty@yahoo.com to let me know your answer.
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hermoso capitulo, muy bien escrito my espero que muy pronto alces nuevos para leer, ana maria
schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
think am going to like this. keep it coming, please
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
que voy a decir de estos 4 capitulos que lei de un tiron, salvo que es alucinante, no veo la hora que levantes mas para seguir esta hermosa historia, ana maria