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for Slave by will

by Felidae24

schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This sounds quite good for someone whose mother language isn't English. I hope you have intentions of continuing it. I'm very curious as to what Ares 'Saw', what it means that he's a Seer and what will happen now that the king knows that bit of information. I know the lack of reviews must have discouraged you, but your best bet is to look at the 'hits' on the story as most readers don't end up reviewing.

Please do continue this.