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May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First and for most, GRAMMAR
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, the spelling and grammar need to be corrected, and don't forget the punctuation marks. But the story is interesting, i am waiting for more. There's a lot to reveal, like Shadow's history, Cyro's history, and what will happen next. Please update soon! ^^
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have to format your story better. You can just give people a wall of text to read - where are your paragraphs? Why is the title is without Capital letters?
The plot sounds quite nice. I recommend you to find a beta reader.
The plot sounds quite nice. I recommend you to find a beta reader.