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He has a crush on Ugly Davey! That's so cute and adorable! Please update as soon as possible!

Arrgh! Davey should just come clean and then everyone can be happy together. But then I guess it would cut the story short :( I wonder what happened in the past between Tyler & Dean? Gotta love office conflicts & romances. Love the updates- keep them coming!

This story is hilarious. I haven't had so many good laughs in a long time. I just knew that someone would like Davey's crazy clothes. I think Robert is great. My favorite moment so far is the moment where Dave tells Jared that he is gay. I couldn't stop laughing. Jared is a great character. Love the story so far.

I don't think Dave can go any further in the charade without being really messing with Tyler's feelings. I would understand if it was for a life and death reason but just for a silly bet between Dave and Rick, he wouldn't put his entire personal life at risk or play a trick on Tyler like that. Even if he doesn't tell Tyler the whole truth, he should let him know that something is going on. I could see him telling Tyler but leaving the rest of the office in the dark. It would be really terrible to toy with someone like that.

Omfg, I'm laughing hysterically b/c I know who that someone else is!!!! It's David, the PA! Omg, now how the hell is Davey gonna get out of this mess?????

No matter what he does it's not gonna be good. Telling Tyler the truth now will most probably anger Tyler and make him sad at the same time. He'll be pissed at Dave and also sad that there is no David. Either way Davey is screwed, and not in the good way.

Can't wait to read more! :)

(1) Interesting premise! I love how you start off with some mild 'best straight childhood friend' UST xD

Looking forward to see where this is going, I like your writing style!

Milly

Good story

Holy, this chapter sure held some surprises! I couldn't help feeling giddy once I realized that Tyler was about to meet his almost one night stand in his "swan" form. Finally (the crowd is cheering)! Davey is so screwed once Mr Sexy Grey Eyes finds out about his little masquarade though, ehehe. He will so have lots of explaining to do.
Anyways, I'm truly surprised by the mysterious appearance of Dean. Just... please do not make Dean have the hots for Tyler or have Tyler pining for Mr Smith. At least not at present. That would be... wrong... because... they both must have the hots for Dave/Davey! Yeah, that's the way it's supposed to go. Yeah. Right. (Obsessive Davey fangirl mode knows no mercy - beware.)

So I just read all of the chapters in the past hour or so, and I have to say that it's an interesting premise, but I do not see how this can end well. There will inevitably be the great reveal, and then consequences and conflicts, and ugh I'm not looking forward to that. :c

But it's interesting and Tyler is devastatingly attractive and Dave is so screwed. Looking forward to the next update!

You are cruel, cruel, cruel Em, do you know that? lol To leave us hanging like that!

Ok, so Dean and Tyler have known each other their whole lives it seems. And Dean wasn't so wonderful looking and handsome his whole life. So look who's calling the kettle black now! Is that why Dean hates "Ugly" Dave so much? Because he reminds him of himself as a teenager? And maybe he hated the way he looked? He's still a bastard.

So what's with the story of Dean and Tyler?

Oh man, I'm on pins and needles here......can't wait for more! :) Oh, and I LOVED the conversation between Davey and Amy! Hysterical!!! :)