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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! I can't fully explain how much I love this story. It always leaves me with the: "Nooooo, I have to find out what happens next ASAP" feeling. I can never tell what will be the next twist in the plot. I could just read, and read and read and never get tired of it.
I felt so sorry for the poor Davey in this chapter. All heartbroken and alone... I just wanted to give him one big hug.
Also, I am so looking forward to seeing what Dean is going to do now that he KNOWS. Argh, you are killing me with the cliffhangers!
I felt so sorry for the poor Davey in this chapter. All heartbroken and alone... I just wanted to give him one big hug.
Also, I am so looking forward to seeing what Dean is going to do now that he KNOWS. Argh, you are killing me with the cliffhangers!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much and don't think I have reviewed it before so apologize. I think that Tyler is in love with Dave but he could have met Dean? Dean/Tyler? Tyler/Dean/Dave??????? OH YEAH!!! I think a threesome would be awesome since I love these guys and don't want any of them to be hurt.
I hope you update more often now too since this story is really great.
I am getting ready to leave review but how the heck do I type in musical notes and graphs? geeze!
I hope you update more often now too since this story is really great.
I am getting ready to leave review but how the heck do I type in musical notes and graphs? geeze!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Even though I found to be Dean a prick upon first meeting him, I think it'd be great to see more of him and Davey. It'd be nice to go more into their relationship as I definitely think you have a great opening there.
Dean's a dickwad but he's not-of hot in my head!
Dean's a dickwad but he's not-of hot in my head!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORIES~! ;P
i look forward to futher developments in Davey's relationships with the other characters! ;P
i look forward to futher developments in Davey's relationships with the other characters! ;P
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH MY F'ING GOD!! You are so EVIL!!!!! I knew it would be Dean who ended up taking Dave home from the bar! Shit shit shit!!! I screamed NOOOOOO at my computer when he saw it was Dean! lol. So now, Tyler is in love with Ugly Davey. And, because you are an evil author, I just know Dean's going to end up falling for gorgeous Dave! Dave already finds him Dean attractive. What a mess he's in now! I'm manically rubbing my hands together in anticipation for the next chapter!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A donut? Ha, now I'm confused. lol
And OMFG, DEAN????? Of all the people in the bar, Dean had to come sit next to him! OMFG and Dean doesn't even know who he is! lol
Shit, this is gonna be good! :)
Oh, and one more thing: EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, he kissed him after he puked and before he brushed his teeth! lol Ewwwww :(
And OMFG, DEAN????? Of all the people in the bar, Dean had to come sit next to him! OMFG and Dean doesn't even know who he is! lol
Shit, this is gonna be good! :)
Oh, and one more thing: EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, he kissed him after he puked and before he brushed his teeth! lol Ewwwww :(
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
And UNG, you're making me have a major conflict.
I really like Tyler, and I'm going to totally enjoy the moment when Dave and him get together.
I'm also looking forward to the revelation!~
But on the other hand, Dean, fuck I love that asshole :)
and I would be totally alright with them together because of DEAAAN.
Although I have a feeling Dean's going to use his discovery to his advantage~
My drama senses are tingling*
And UNG, you're making me have a major conflict.
I really like Tyler, and I'm going to totally enjoy the moment when Dave and him get together.
I'm also looking forward to the revelation!~
But on the other hand, Dean, fuck I love that asshole :)
and I would be totally alright with them together because of DEAAAN.
Although I have a feeling Dean's going to use his discovery to his advantage~
My drama senses are tingling*
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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Confession time: I've seen this fic several times in my roams through the originals archives, but judged a fic by its title until today, when I wanted something with plot and figured reading this couldn't hurt anything.
In one way, I'm glad for my titling prejudices, because they gave me this unexpected reading joy, right when I needed it most.
But for the future, I solemnly swear not to judge a fic by its title- unless there's some atrocious typo/grammar error left unfixed. That's just never a good sign.
The real reason I love this: I see everything coming. Oh, sure, unexpected plot twists can be fun, but they often make me feel somewhat stupid for not seeing it coming- even if the deal is that the outcome was purposely made difficult to discern with few references and generic descriptions by the author on purpose, and really not my fault. And even knowing what's coming next, I still look forward to how you write it, and know I'll laugh at least once a chapter.
It's just- ohhhhhhh, damn. This fic makes me feel psychic.
1. When he met the guy at the park, I knew he was Davey's new boss, and speculated that his 'blind date' offer would come into play somehow.
2. Icy blue eyes = bad/bad but abused guy, even if the rest of him is hot. You want a blue-eyed protagonist? The blue eyes are equated to the base of a campfire's flames.
3. Guy at club is Tyler.
4. POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT! The odd look in Dean's eyes? He probably got close enough to see that the pimples are actually makeup, knows something's being hidden, and will do his best to unveil Dave at his own convenience once he figures out the whole picture.
5. ANOTHER POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT! Tyler is crushing on his PA, despite outward appearances. Yey, unveiling of identity will be fun~!
No need to confirm or deny anything, I just hope you don't think a change in the direction of the plot is necessary because of one reader. ^^;
Can't wait for the next chapter to see if anything's confirmed/hinted at for me to interpret. Feel free to e-mail me if you'd like. :3
In one way, I'm glad for my titling prejudices, because they gave me this unexpected reading joy, right when I needed it most.
But for the future, I solemnly swear not to judge a fic by its title- unless there's some atrocious typo/grammar error left unfixed. That's just never a good sign.
The real reason I love this: I see everything coming. Oh, sure, unexpected plot twists can be fun, but they often make me feel somewhat stupid for not seeing it coming- even if the deal is that the outcome was purposely made difficult to discern with few references and generic descriptions by the author on purpose, and really not my fault. And even knowing what's coming next, I still look forward to how you write it, and know I'll laugh at least once a chapter.
It's just- ohhhhhhh, damn. This fic makes me feel psychic.
1. When he met the guy at the park, I knew he was Davey's new boss, and speculated that his 'blind date' offer would come into play somehow.
2. Icy blue eyes = bad/bad but abused guy, even if the rest of him is hot. You want a blue-eyed protagonist? The blue eyes are equated to the base of a campfire's flames.
3. Guy at club is Tyler.
4. POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT! The odd look in Dean's eyes? He probably got close enough to see that the pimples are actually makeup, knows something's being hidden, and will do his best to unveil Dave at his own convenience once he figures out the whole picture.
5. ANOTHER POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT! Tyler is crushing on his PA, despite outward appearances. Yey, unveiling of identity will be fun~!
No need to confirm or deny anything, I just hope you don't think a change in the direction of the plot is necessary because of one reader. ^^;
Can't wait for the next chapter to see if anything's confirmed/hinted at for me to interpret. Feel free to e-mail me if you'd like. :3
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well well just who might this "someone else" be. xD
What a mess
What a mess
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch.14: WHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT??? Tyler tells Dave there is someone else??? OH MY FREAKING GOD! He let it slip earlier that he loved his P.A.!!! Do NOT tell me the someone else is Ugly Davey! Oh shit! He's in love with Ugly Davey???!!!!!! My jaw is on the floor! What a twist if it's true!
SQUEEEEEEE!!!
SQUEEEEEEE!!!