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for Ugly Davey

by frozenembers

person Faithsins
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please XD
person IAMSOGODLIKEANDYOUKNOWIT
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I need more. update soon
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story but keep losing track of it due to the long intermissions between updates. I wish chapters were a little bit longer too but other than that, keep up the good work and good luck.
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This. Chapter made me so happy.
Although, I feel a bit like Davey, cheating on my feelings, on his feelings for Tyler.
But oh god, unghh.. that scene with Dean was so hot.
I would totally be okay with them together if concurring scenes were said hot.

I'm glad to see you updating again :)
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 16: Oh No!!!! The hole he has dug just keeps getting deeper!!!!!!!!!! Well at least he didn't have oral or get penetrated. It was the heat of the moment type of thing. I'm sure Tyler would understand......lol. You know, I thought I figured out where this story was going but you keep throwing all these twists and turns into it. I love it! Now the big question is, when he goes to work next, does he dress like Ugly Davey or does he finally give up the ruse and go as David.
person jaskolka
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is this really? Can it be? Have my prayers been heard? Yes, it IS an update;)
[The crowd is cheering like mad, mad, mad. ... Ok, it was only me being happy but the feeling was definitely there.]

Now, let's get to the point. I missed Tyler this chapter. He and Dave are just so cute together (ah, the chemistry) that I can't wait to see how the big boss is going to try to win over his lovely P.A. Hmm... blushing Tyler - me like. Anyways, back from my fangirl fantasies to the real last chapter action - at one point Davey's hot and angry moment with Dean made me so very truly madly deeply ANGRY, annoyed, disappointed, AND so on and so forth. I wanted to shout at our ugly-pretty hero to clear his lust addled brain, immediately stop his dishonorable actions, remember whom he is dealing with, bitch slap this very Mr. Asshole Smith (or maybe not since I don't like too much drama, but damn if it doesn't sound good in this review hehehe) and get the hell out of the monster's lair. Fortunately, my infuriated self was appeased by Dave's remorse. I actually ended up feeling sorry for him, hmmm... It's good that he can see that going for sex with your nemesis while having feelings for somebody else is not gonna do. Sooo, we are pretty clear about Dave's feelings towards this encounter but how about Dean's reaction? This is going to be fun, fun, fun on Monday when they all are to meet in the office. BRING IT ON!!! [can be also read as: update, fast!]
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you finally updated on here! lol

I can't believe Dave and Dean did that! At least Dean sounded like he was sorry.

How the hell is Dave gonna face him at work? And shit! Now he has to worry that Dean is gonna be pushing him out the door in a month!

I wonder if Tyler's gonna make his move on "Ugly" Dave?

Can't wait for the next update Em! :)
person Avelynn
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
give me moooooore *q* lots of faster, better, longer chapters *.* btw Dave screw tayler and take Dean, if not I'll gladly take him x3
person reader
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah! I go crazy, I need an update! [I'm not sure if I got it right, but did dean just find out that Dave is Dave? If so we're in for a hell of a chapter]. I hope your new year isn't to busy and you will find time to update soon.

person kylee123
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Best ending line ever. Does this mean that Dean recognizes Dave as the same guy from the office? I really wish that this was a threesome. I would love to see Tyler and Dean and Dave as a unit.