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for Ugly Davey

by frozenembers

person Mint
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Do not think I hav reviewed this story yet but I enjoy it a lot! It's so entertaining. Can't wait to read some more!!

Keep up the nice work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Omg, Omg, I am laughing hysterically!!!!! I betcha Tyler remembered he didn't have any ketchup with dinner! I wonder if Tyler knew all along that David was Dave? That would actually save David; Tyler doesn't seem to be upset with him...

Unless of course Tyler didn't notice all his other acne spots turning to 'blood' on his face. Then David would have a lot of explaining to do!

Cannot wait for the next chapter Em! This one took wwwaaaayyyy too long!

Oh and p.s.; I didn't notice anywhere where you needed a beta....Just sayin'.
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh I just want Tyler to figure it out or Dave to tell him already! How dense can someone be to not notice it's the same person! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heh, it's about time Davey came clean :) Can't wait to see what happens next!!
person FaithSins
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. Just my thoughts -It would freaken awesome if Davey ended up with Dean instead not that Tyler is bad but either way, if it didn't go that way I would still love it so please update soon I'll be looking forward to it. :D
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this story and it absolutely hilarious!

Love the whole idea and the underlying subplots and twists.

Dreading Tyler finding out about Dave/David, it is not going to be pretty.

Have a feeling Robert knows about Dave/David but is playing ignorant for now.

Look forward to how this plays out!!

Great job!!
person jaskolka
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm always ecstatic to see an update of Ugly Davey.
It was so cute how Tyler kept on coming on to Dave - made me all warm and giddy.
Then again, I'm worried about the truth being revealed. I hope that when the time comes Tyler will understand.
Geez, who would have thought that such a silly prank will get out of control so fast.
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 17: This story is going to be the death of me!! How is Ugly Davey going to pull off his disguise on a trip with Tyler??!!! I just don't see why he doesn't come clean now before he gets even further into this hole he dug...sigh.
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg, all I can say is Omg. What's Dave gonna do? I know he's thrilled about going on the business trip with Tyler, but if they SHARE A ROOOM?????? How's he gonna put on his "ugly" face every morning and take it off every night? He can't keep it on the whole weekend; his fake zits will start moving or falling off. lol Wouldn't THAT look suspicious?! hahah

Oh man, poor Dave. What's he gonna do? He's going to lose either way. He goes with Tyler, and/or tells him the truth, he'll lose him. If he waits, Dean will do it for him and he'll still lose Tyler. Shit.

Don't keep us waiting too long Em! This last update was a long time coming! lol :)
person Leah
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God I'm so addicted to this story I wish I'd found it when it was finished! I'm so bad at waiting! I love how you've brought a lot more depth and realism to the characters as we progress in the story. I also love the interaction between Dean and Dave and find myself hoping for more of that throughout the chapters. Great job; I'm absolutely hooked and addicted so you're definitely doing something right ;)