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for Ugly Davey

by frozenembers

schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
UGHHHH and the hole gets deeper! This is going to blow up in his face epically!
person Mint
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, it is such a pleasure reading this story and always looking forward to your updates! Please continue writing this and your other stories! :D Please update ASAP!
person Lisa
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay Em for finally updating! lol :)

Oh boy, now Dave knows Tyler always wanted him, but as David. What's he gonna do now? He should confess now before it's too late. And besides that shark Dean is waiting ready to 'out' David as Dave. Better Tyler hear if from Dave/David than Dean.

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more; hopefully the wait won't be that long? (hint, hint, poke, poke)
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously hoping that David ends up with Dean instead of Tyler.
person Faithsins
schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:) moreeeeeee please
person DEKORX
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GAH YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON, BAH! UGH! NNNGGGGGDDDDHHHH UPDATEEEE ;A; Uhm.. sorry about that, what I meant to say is, I'm so happy to see an update to this story. I love it, and can't wait to read the next chapter when Davey is surely screwed in some fashion.. Thanks! :D
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great build up to both of them finally having time alone, and just when you think it was going to be an open road leading to the discovery of their mutual interest in each other - TORMENT!!!!!

This is just too gorgeous!!

person jaskolka
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I'm sensing a humongous moment of truth coming on... You are so screwed Davey and not in a good sense, heh.
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That's such a horrible place to end!
Oh god!~~~
I'm gleefully horrified at what could take place next.
On one hand I really want Tyler to find out, although I know he isn't going to be okay with the revelation.
But on the other hand, I kind of want the ruse to be kept even though when it eventually comes to light,
the reaction and consequences won't be at all pleasant-and they'll probably be worse than if it's revealed now...
It's such a dilemma!
But then, I can totally see the possibility of Tyler already knowing! The 'ketchup' part hints me towards this..
it could be wishful thinking however, cause I mean...If Tyler liked Davey it would be feesible for him to know what the other ate, and as such - no ketchup!
But then again, his prior relation ship with Dean could have him being able to tell the difference between true pimples and fake ones, and that he's just waiting
for David/Davey to tell him the truth..
god. sorry. I'm going to stop guessing and blathering now.

Looking forward to the next chapter! (and Davey's subsequent matters of concealment :)
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG, his face is melting!!! He is screwed!!! lol. Can't wait for next chapter!!

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