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for Ugly Davey

by frozenembers

person dazedandconfused
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oops, I guess Rich can't end up with Tyler because he's married to Amy, LOL.
person Chibikodo
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if Dave should be with Tyle or Dean now. If he can't cone clean to his boyfriend, and soon, I can't see their relationship working because it won't be real. I like Dean now. :)
person dhcan
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, but these cliff hangers are ruining my life...
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is kick ass, So voting for Dean and Davey to hit it off with sparks and may of other naughty things lol... Good Work.
person amoxi
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, with this Dave's just digging his grave deeper. I kinda battled in my head who he would have called, Dean or Tyler and thought he'd more likely call Tyler. After all Tyler, as far as I know knew nobody from acne Davids family, I guess? Ahhh, it's been so long since I've read the beginning of the story. Dave could have asked Tyler the same thing, pretending to be Dave's bf, but I guess it would have been even more risky for him, the chance of Tyler realizing he and David are the same person. Now why exactly is Timmy with Dean at the party?

Oh hell, this is all one big confusion and I'm enjoying it a big time. Just hope you won't get tangled up in the web and loose overview ;)

Thanks for continuing! I really was a tiny bit afraid this story would be abandoned. Dun blame me, authors are doing it all the time.
person Amanti
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and let Tyler know about the bet! Then we can finally read the hot makeup sex!!^^
person Chibikodo
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is Tyler really that dumb? I don't think so. I feel like he's waiting for Dave to come clean (I hope) and tell him the truth. That said, would Dean really help out? What a mess. Lol Just f-kin man up Dave.
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I just r&r'd on the other site, shhh, don't tell anyone, and I just remembered something: Tyler might still be out of town and his father, Timmy's grandfather may be taking Timmy to the party. So Dave/Davey wouldn't have to feel awkward with Tyler AND Dean there, even though Tyler is clueless about Davey's true identity. Or is it Dave; I'm confusing myself! lol

I am so looking forward to the next chapter; I'm waiting with bated breath.....
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm really confused: I was just reading the reviews here and one reviewer asked why Dean brought Timmy. That didn't even dawn on me that Dean would have brought Timmy. I thought it was just a coincidence that he arrived the same time as Timmy. Oh, but wait. Dean knows Tyler's father (I'm assuming) and then they both would have walked out together. Wow, why would Tyler ask Dean to take Timmy? Is his dad sick or something? I thought Tyler hates Dean?
person dazedandconfused
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I seriously thought you had abandoned or discontinued this story so am very happy to have found two new chapters have been posted recently. I can't wait to read next chapter and to find out why Dean is so read to help Davey out. Please keep those new updates coming!

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