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for Ugly Davey

by frozenembers

schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the shout-out Em! :)

Joshie is so cute! My oldest son is named Joshua and my mom used to call him Joshie when he was younger.

The trip to the mall did sound like a zoo! That sales girl did sound a bit crazy! But, after all, who goes into a store looking for clothes that would make them look ugly? lol Now THAT'S crazy! lol

Oh, I noticed one little typo, in case you wanted to go back and fix it. ...It had been almost a weak, should be week, not weak.

Anyway, love the story so far and can't wait for more! :)