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Haha! It's going to be a heck of a day when Dave shows up in three months looking hot! Glad Robert didn't recognise him, who knows what that old man would've said. :)

I am enjoying the story it is fun reading

Ha. Fake pimples. xP Figures. Can't wait to see what happens at work, he's probably gonna get some big WTF looks. :'D And I absolutely love Rick's comments. xP

Hahaha. This is a really slow going story, but it is pretty amusing xD I was cackling the entire time reading this! I love it! Keep on with the good work~!

LOL! I cannot wait for more to come!

Poor Dave xDD

How much do guys wanna bet that this Old man is his new Employer? haha XDD

D'aww that was just so cute! I don't even know wether to laugh or be creeped out by Robert. Hmm... why do I get the feeling Robert's son is the new boss?

Also, I'm glad I could help. Makes my day knowing I was useful to someone. ^^

Absolutely not bad for someone writing for the first time! I wish we had got a more detailed description of Davey, or really of everyone in the story. But I'm liking the idea, this is probably going to be either funny or hillarious so I'll be looking forward to more updates. Keep it up!

So I had this whole review written and it never went thru. And then I couldn't get back on AFF; don't know if they're having problems or not. Maybe they're on the east coast and are experiencing Hurricane Irene like I am.

Anyway....no need to thank me for pointing out the typo. I am a pain in the ass like that. It's the editor in me; I'll find shit no one else will notice. Just tell me to shut up and I won't mention them again! With that said, I'll mention one little thing: when describing the older guy's outfit, you wrote: 'The only thing that did not seem to fit in with his assemble', it should have been ...seem to fit in with his ensemble. Now I'll shut up.

Awesome chapter! I practically spewed my ice tea all over my keyboard reading about the older guy trying to set Dave up with his son! At first I was thinking this guy's gonna wind up being Dave's new boss, but then when he mentioned his son, I'm trying to figure out how Dave and his son will finally meet. Maybe during the open house at the school? Maybe he'll go with Rick and his wife and then he'll meet the older guy's son?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :) Remember: just tell me to shut up, lol.

Ah, I loved Ugly Betty! lol

This sounds like a really interesting story. I can't wait to see how Davey is going to make himself look ugly! :)