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for Ugly Davey

by frozenembers

schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! I know that was Taylor he almost hooked up with! They had an instant attraction! Yes :) And that was sooooo hot!!! :) I can see why you had fun writing it! What a way to wake up on a Wednesday morning. More please :)
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, he can get his number when he shows up for work on Monday! lol

Omg, what an awesome set-up Em! Now of course Dave will recognize Tyler (I think even if Tyler was wearing ugly gear, Dave would still recognize him, lol). So wait, Tyler may recognize Dave also. At least he'll think his eyes and mouth look familiar! lol

Oh shit! I cannot wait for Monday. Well the Monday in your story. But wait, you're not leaving us hanging like this for two weeks are you??????? Damn those exams! :( I hope you get thru them with flying colors! But if you have some extra time in between studying and taking tests and partying (yes, I went to college; you can't be studying all the time, hehe), maybe you can crank out another chapter! :)
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, I almost forgot: I hope the kid's ok too! :)
person Windy
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, frustration when you reach the end of the chapter. Hope the next one will be updated soon because it's really really addicting. Thanks for this enjoyable moment.
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. <3
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! :) LOL at him spitting coffee all over Dean. Ok, I know you are setting him up to run into someone at the gay club. Will it be Dean or Taylor?? or both? .....can't wait for next chapter!
person carmen
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Hahahah, forgive me for saying this but at first, I dont know why but I thought this story would be those pwp with weird conversations thrown in at random. But I'm glad I persevered and read through the story and now I cant wait for chapter 8! :) the story is easy to read, with a smooth flow and the light banter between Dave & his friend makes me feel happy. I especially loved it when Mr Fritz asked Dave where he got his carrot & bunny necktie.
Hope this was a good review (and bribe for the rest of the story) ;)
Thanks for sharing this story here!
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a plan! lol

I squealed when I saw a new update! :)

I can't wait for Dave to finally meet Tyler. I can't believe that shit happened to Dave in the lounge. As if Dean didn't hate him before (all b/c of his looks; isn't that sad?) but now he thinks he's not only ugly, but clumsy too! Ha, if he only knew Dave was better looking than him! lol

Can't wait for Monday! :) (the story Monday, not today Monday, hehe)
person reader1962
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I was very happy to see another chapter up, and am looking foward to Davey and Tyler meeting. I am glad you did not desert your story
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I never in my entire life thought I would see Prince George used in a story, not even online. It took me a couple of rereads to even be certain I wasn't seeing things! Ah, but the story is good, well written and oh so amusing. However, I am curious now. Have you actually been to PG or did you just spin a globe and point for name?