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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woah. I am SO pleasantly surprised by this.
Most interesting new fic I've read in a while. I can't WAIT for more.
Most interesting new fic I've read in a while. I can't WAIT for more.
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this!
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You cant leave this as a one shot!!! I have to know what happens!!
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm starting to get a little annoyed with you, Kiix, to be totally honest.
First I have to wait on Cinder for ages and then you dare to update something else equally addictive! And not even that! You have the audacity to tell me it's a ONESHOT! I mean, what the hell?!
I haven't forgotten (or forgiven for that matter) that hot pizza boy story you posted under Xiik and then deleted either!
I'm not good at waiting and I don't like left hanging so you better kick those publishers' asses to get Cinder out like now, then put your head down, resign from work and all other social life, lock the front door and barricade yourself in your home with all other furniture expect for what you need for writing.
Paaaaah! I'm frustrated. Sorry.
First I have to wait on Cinder for ages and then you dare to update something else equally addictive! And not even that! You have the audacity to tell me it's a ONESHOT! I mean, what the hell?!
I haven't forgotten (or forgiven for that matter) that hot pizza boy story you posted under Xiik and then deleted either!
I'm not good at waiting and I don't like left hanging so you better kick those publishers' asses to get Cinder out like now, then put your head down, resign from work and all other social life, lock the front door and barricade yourself in your home with all other furniture expect for what you need for writing.
Paaaaah! I'm frustrated. Sorry.
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...this oneshot...
I held my breath, completely captivated, from the first sentence to the last sentence! The slave-master psychology was so strong and intriguing in so few moments--a single scene, in fact! We meet Vincent the same time Lance does, and yet so much can be gleaned from your visuals and interactions. I can even imagine projections about their future. I bet Vincent's arrogance would be both vital to his success and yet-ironically--the source of his pain too.
I held my breath, completely captivated, from the first sentence to the last sentence! The slave-master psychology was so strong and intriguing in so few moments--a single scene, in fact! We meet Vincent the same time Lance does, and yet so much can be gleaned from your visuals and interactions. I can even imagine projections about their future. I bet Vincent's arrogance would be both vital to his success and yet-ironically--the source of his pain too.
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
>:3 awesome. Ms. ms. ms. You have these wonderful tangents, and we love you for sharing them (because, well, we love'em!).. but then. theeeeeeeen, when they are over? **cries** SOOO saaaaaad~ lol
Neat premise. Delving a little into demon culture doesn't seem like a bad idea~ And where Incubi are concerned, well, how you paint them? :} Awesome.
Hope this baby catches on for more chapters......... one day.......... <3
Neat premise. Delving a little into demon culture doesn't seem like a bad idea~ And where Incubi are concerned, well, how you paint them? :} Awesome.
Hope this baby catches on for more chapters......... one day.......... <3
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY you're back.. i love the start. but the set up has made it where the incubus will be either too resistant or over eager both of which kill the story half way through with introducing new stimuli. but i digress you got this handled...
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, ohh ! Welcome back Kiix ! :)
This first chapter seems promising... Can't wait for more...
This first chapter seems promising... Can't wait for more...
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is.... new. interesting. looking forward to more........................
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i hope there's more... and more of Neko-laus too.