rate_review Reviews

I love it....any thing to do with kings is sooo cool!!!! please keep going!!!

hope to see more soon :)
the chapter may need some minor editing (likes commas), but I'm relieved I didn't find any irritating grammar mistakes (as they are - their).
the story seems promising. maybe a bit predictable, but I don't mind. if you manage to bring out the personalities of the characters, then this story will have what it takes to be an enjoyable read. =)

interesting start, i really like it and i hope there is more to come soon!!!!