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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it....any thing to do with kings is sooo cool!!!! please keep going!!!
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hope to see more soon :)
the chapter may need some minor editing (likes commas), but I'm relieved I didn't find any irritating grammar mistakes (as they are - their).
the story seems promising. maybe a bit predictable, but I don't mind. if you manage to bring out the personalities of the characters, then this story will have what it takes to be an enjoyable read. =)
the chapter may need some minor editing (likes commas), but I'm relieved I didn't find any irritating grammar mistakes (as they are - their).
the story seems promising. maybe a bit predictable, but I don't mind. if you manage to bring out the personalities of the characters, then this story will have what it takes to be an enjoyable read. =)
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, i really like it and i hope there is more to come soon!!!!