rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed the first chapter of your first ever story and have already fallen in love with Puck! He has attitude and I like that. I wonder who the guy in the suit is that he stole the briefcase from but am thinking maybe Mafia or something. Is Puck his real name or a nickname? I wonder who opened the briefcase and stole the contents of whatever was in it, this can't be good news for Puck.

By the way, I just wanted to mention that you might want to fix story to allow for anonymous reviews, right now it only allows signed in ones, and that way you might get more reviews. Also, don't get discouraged by any lack of reviews because sometimes it takes a while for readers to catch on to a good thing.

Excellent job writing the first chapter and I can't wait to find out who this guy in the suit is, what's his name, and what is he going to do with Puck? How often do you plan on updating this story? Maybe you can put a note up on your author page to let readers know so we can keep an eye out for new updates.

Later,

CTF

Well this sure look like a good story!

I wonder what will happen next! I can't wait for more!!

Thanks for the story! xxx