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Love it so far. Gorilla and puck -this is going to be fun

ooh, another cliffie!

Mr. Scot is not a happy man, he acts like a mob boss (which he probably is... or something like it...) and now I'm even more curious about the suitcase. What could be so important, to make even Mr. Gorilla afraid of him.

Mr. Gorilla's character is warming up to me, the more you write, the more he seems like a good guy getting bossed around by the bad guy.
Although I like bad guys, they have a good kind of bad lol

Poor puck, to get his kneecap broken like that... and getting shot with heroin laced morphine when he had never tried drugs. I can't wait to see what else it'll influence him to do... the head knocking on the window was hilarious... and imagining him making the exchange on a seedy neighborhood even more!

You left us hanging, not knowing what Mr. Gorilla is going to do!!! I'm dying of curiosity!

This chapter was very good, and the story is very original as well, keep up the good work!

i am really starting to get into this story, it is really good, so keep up the great work!!!!:)

Good job. Update soon

piqued

Well, good review ! ^^
I like it so far. And your writing is good... Waiting for more soon ?!

Very interesting story, I can't wait to see what's going to happen to Puck and what'll happen to his mother as well, since Puck probably won't be bringing money anymore. I'm sure whoever got him isn't going to let and he must be very powerful as well. I wonder if "Mr. Gorilla" is the boss (which means he'll probably be the seme... he he he) or if he's someone's right hand. I'm also curious about what was in the briefcase and who stole it from Puck's house without his notice. Puck is the typical pocket thief, one of those that makes people want to hit him with a brick (of fifteen...) for stealing their wallet. Making him a thief and giving him a bad economical situation is good in this story because it shows what he's wiling to do to survive :)

The first chapter is making me beg for more, so I'll be anxiously waiting for the next update!

A very promising beginning. The story is well paced and it is really fun to read.

I am already hooked on your story and think the first chapter was very good. I am looking forward to reading more of it and finding out what happens to Puck now that he has gotten himself into this mess. You did a great job writing first chapter and I can find no fault with it even if you don't have a Beta.

I will keep an eye out for new updates on this story.

this looks interesting!!! can't wait for more!!