rate_review Reviews

Awww! Some action with Mr. Gorilla! The last scene where they share the bed was very nice. I wonder in what positions they'll wake up tomorrow. :P

Now we know Mr. Gorilla's name! It's Edward, which actually made me think of Twilight at first, but since he's a different kind of Edward, the thought quickly evaporated :)

I think Puck is getting addicted to the pills, which shouldn't be hard, considering what they are...

I can't wait to see what happens tomorrow with Mr. Scot! I thought the bag would contain something more important than the drug, but I guess I'll find out more as the story goes :)

Also a new character introduced: Puck's mom. Adding her to the plot was good, it solidified the story and Puck's character, since he interacted with her :)

I'm rolling around waiting for the next chapter, and I must say you did an excellent job on this chapter as well as on the others :)

Interesting. I'll read it.
Thank you for your story, well written anyway !

A french reader,

Merely Truth

oh i know! hes an undercover cop?!

Your story got me hooked! It's a fantastic first chapter! Hopefully you don't let us wait too much for the next one because I really need to know what is happening to poor Puck.

This is good. Update soon!!!

Hmmm, interesting... Please continue! :)

Ave's likes Mr.Gorilla :3

I squealed with joy upon seeing you had uploaded another new chapter!!!!

Oh my gosh!!!! Poor Puck!!!! I hate that Mr. Scot!!!!!

I think I am starting to like Gorilla guy, Edward, and wonder how he's going to help Puck and himself out of this mess. Who stole the contents of the briefcase? I am stumped by that little mystery.

If you start a mailing list for updates on this story, please add me to it.

Later,

CTF

At first I wasn't sure about the story (Just from the title and summary). But then I decided to just give it a chance, and I'm glad I did! Its a great story!

Wow, this story is really, really good....and addictive too. I couldn't believe the Gorillas' boss, Mr. Scot, actually shattered Puck's kneecap with a golf club. What a nasty creep he is and on top of that everyone is afraid of him. Although, now I see why they all are after what he did to Puck.

Puck is funny when he's high on morphine but I bet he'll be crying again once it wears off and I am really starting to like the big Gorilla guy too. He's growing on me.

By the description of summary, I thought whoever Puck stole from was going to make him his little sex slave or something. I don't know. I am weird.