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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sheesh. wouldnt that dude just kill puck now that he doesnt need him anymore?
goodness, i hope that kid gets a hospital. i cant even imagine the pain. and jesus fuck, now hes addicted to heroine. boy, what a string of bad luck.
goodness, i hope that kid gets a hospital. i cant even imagine the pain. and jesus fuck, now hes addicted to heroine. boy, what a string of bad luck.
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG man, please continue to update. The whole relationship between these two are way too interesting to stop!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Only three reviews from last chapter, so let me add another one. ^.* I love this story so far... poor Puck. But there needs to be more action in it!!! maybe like a love triangle with mr. Scott? Either way keep going!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job, hope u can continue!!
Waitin for more!
Waitin for more!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dongs, I saw this story up a week or so ago, meant to read it and didn't get around to it. I'm glad I saw it was updated b/c I did want to read it! :)
I read all four chapters and can't wait for more! Poor Puck; didn't realize what he was getting himself into by stealing that briefcase!
Hopefully Mr. Scot won't break any more of his bones! lol
Looking forward to the next chapter!
I read all four chapters and can't wait for more! Poor Puck; didn't realize what he was getting himself into by stealing that briefcase!
Hopefully Mr. Scot won't break any more of his bones! lol
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and btw: your writing is flawless; you don't need a beta. It's such a pleasure to read a story that's free from typos, grammatical and punctuation (or lack of) errors! :) Great job! =)
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Puck, I just want him to survive - I like it so far and look forward to more
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the direction this has been going. I like the bond that's been growing between the two men, and I'd love to see it grow and develop. It's refreshing to read a story like this where it doesn't appear he's going to be falling for the mafia boss that broke his leg (I hope), and rather they guy that helped him out. I like that more than I can say actually.
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The characters and story line are intriguing. I would definitely like to see where this is going.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story, looking forward to more.