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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hate Richard... Poor Puck. I cant wait to see some more Edward and Puck action!
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Puck. I don't even think Edward can get him out of not winding up in Scot's bed. And I'm really warming up to Edward now. Before I wasn't too sure about him, but he seems like a pretty cool guy. And he's helping Puck, so that's a good thing. :)
This is such an awesome story! Can't wait for more! :)
Oh, I noticed on little typo, in case you wanted to go back and change it: when Puck yelled at Scot to stop..."...stop, please. I'll do whatever you want!" The attacker was unmoved by his please. It should be pleas, not please. lol
This is such an awesome story! Can't wait for more! :)
Oh, I noticed on little typo, in case you wanted to go back and change it: when Puck yelled at Scot to stop..."...stop, please. I'll do whatever you want!" The attacker was unmoved by his please. It should be pleas, not please. lol
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ugh i really hate richard and i want him dead before he rapes puck. Rapist are scum and if it actually happens please warn me so i can skip that chapter. ugh richard is a major asshole.
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Luv this so far. Can't wait for Puck and Edward to get 2getha!! Mr. Scot's a dirty old man hehe. Update asap!
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story, very interesting, I enjoyed reading it. Love the danger and not knowing what's next for this poor guy. Bookmarked awaiting updates!
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again for the update.
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! please update soon! For some reason I actually hope Puck can eventually show off in front of the gorilla lol as a thief! Cuz he really is more than a wimpering kid! he's so tough!
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting so good, i really really like it, maybe the chapters could be a little longer though because i get sad when i finnish them to soon and it leaves me dying for more, upload soooon please!!!! :)
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like the story but, puck do all the thing with all himself with broken leg to retrieve the package? i think is imposible.....and if mr scott belief puck story.....is not make sense...what do u think? update soon kay...love to read the next updated....
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, Puck got addicted to the drugs... I hope Edward doesn't give him any in the future, he's turning into a junkie.
I can't wait to see what'll happen when they talk to Richard! I bet the man will notice Puck's state and it won't go well for Edward and Puck. Or maybe he's smart enough to know someone like Puck doesn't have enough guts( Puck's a thief but I bet he never touched a gun in his life) to shoot someone, even if it's in the foot.
Mmm, I wonder what punishments they'll receive... Edward's back is marked probably from them... poor guy, working for someone like Mr. Scot isn't an easy life.
Their sleeping arrangements was THE BEST! Waking up cuddling without realizing it, feeling self conscious... ahh, such a wonderful scene! ^^ I can't wait for more!
Isn't it a bit dangerous to realign Puck's knee without x-rays or anything? And I don't think Edward has a doctor degree, even if his life is hard and he probably learned how to treat several wounds... but it is a good scene, and even more so thanks to the pillow bitter reply he he he...
I can't wait for more, please update soon!
I can't wait to see what'll happen when they talk to Richard! I bet the man will notice Puck's state and it won't go well for Edward and Puck. Or maybe he's smart enough to know someone like Puck doesn't have enough guts( Puck's a thief but I bet he never touched a gun in his life) to shoot someone, even if it's in the foot.
Mmm, I wonder what punishments they'll receive... Edward's back is marked probably from them... poor guy, working for someone like Mr. Scot isn't an easy life.
Their sleeping arrangements was THE BEST! Waking up cuddling without realizing it, feeling self conscious... ahh, such a wonderful scene! ^^ I can't wait for more!
Isn't it a bit dangerous to realign Puck's knee without x-rays or anything? And I don't think Edward has a doctor degree, even if his life is hard and he probably learned how to treat several wounds... but it is a good scene, and even more so thanks to the pillow bitter reply he he he...
I can't wait for more, please update soon!