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Not bad but trippy. Still give a high rating and hope you make more.

Okay I'm hooked, I want to see where the story headed. So they were cheated and the guys didn't really give a package at all hmmm.... interesting. I hope the Mom doesn't spend all of puck's money. Ain't going to say it was 'earned' I really don't like theives. neh but I'm addicted to this story so I'm going to read it as long as you update.

CrimsonWatersAlien

Jeezus Mr. Gorilla turned Puck into a junkie....... sheesh I hope he stops giving Puck the 'medicine'. Drugs are never a really good thing.

Another interesting chapter of Puck, I can't believe his real name is 'puck' maybe his real name is percival or something that's why he likes that name. I mean who would honestly name a kid Puck? I could just imagine all the jokes and teasings growing up with a name like that.

And that Mr. Scot dude is a total ass. He's bisexual though, no 'REAL' straight man would have sex with another. Even for power there has to be some sexual attraction which meants he's bi right?

any way I like Edward and the fact he's trying to undo the mistake with the drugs. :P

I'm off to read another chapter.

CrimsonWatersAlien

AGh *smacks Puck on the backside of the head* Okay I get it drugs are addicting but you idiot! You honestly need to stop! You're going to do things your going to regret!

Hmm......... I'm talking to a character in your story. I guess that means I'm into your story. I wanted to punch Mr. Scot on the face. What a jerk

CrimsonWatersAlien

Ya know I don't think I could do that myself to shoot someone, unless they hurt my family and I was defending them........ then it would be on like donky kong! Sorry I just am protective of my family. they're precious to me and worth more then I see myself as worth. LOL anyway another great chapter

CrimsonWatersAlien

All right! I really want to murder Richard at this moment for what he is doing to Puck. I hope Edward knows that it's not Puck's fault for the way he's acting.

Yeah, you should quit those cancer sticks. Pneumonia (however it's spelled) is serious shit. I hope you're all better. Take this opportunity to chuck all those cigarettes.

I feel so bad for Puck. He's between a rock and a hard place (another awesome story, btw). He can't get away from Richard and now he's back on the drugs. He should have tried to stay with Edward; maybe Edward could have fought Richard and won. lol

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, how 'bout the patch? Does that even work?

Oh my God! I hate Richard and hope that Edward kills him but only after torturing him very slowly so that he suffers for what he is doing to poor Puck!

I really don't like Richard and want Puck to end up with Edward, PLEASE!!!!

This chapter really made me see Richard's true colors and there is no way him and Puck can stay together!

I don't know but I am kind of conflicted with whom I want Puck to end up with. I am hoping it will be Edward (Puck's Gorilla) and not Richard but there is something about him I am not sure about yet so will wait and see what you have planned.

I feel so bad for Puck! The poor kid can't have anything go right for him not even when he tries to escape. I am just relieved he wasn't punished for trying.

I am kind of worried about the dinner and hope that Puck can keep out of trouble.