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by Lawldongs

person Anon
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, the last time you posted was around March 2012 and you had left this note in chapter;

Well, apparently 'in the next week' is Lawldongs speak for 'after several months'. Sorry it took so long, I'm not even going to try and justify it with an excuse. Hopefully the smut at the beginning of the chapter made up for it? I do have the next chapter halfway done, so hopefully this time it won't take so ungodly long to get posted.

Why couldn't you at least post a halfway done chapter even if it was finished instead of keeping us waiting for an eternity?
person dazedandconfused
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just dropping by to see if you are feeling better and hope you are on the road to recovery. I had almost forgot about this story but for some reason just thought about it so checked and was very afraid it had been removed. I have bookmarked it so I don't forget and hope someday you get back to writing it and other new stories. I think you are a fantastic and gifted author.
person violet
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Richard is such a dick...get it? richard...dick
anyways hope there'll be more soon. i like how puck isn't all weepy and self-pitying
person Muu
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to think :( I really hope that Richard will turn out to be a nice guy for Puck (falling in love :D!) and treat him better.. but at the same time it's so damn obvious that it won't turn out well in that regard. Edward is his saviour and I hope Puck realizes this quick. Aww man drugs are bad for you. I hope you update soon!!! Can't wait to read what happens next!
person Moon Whistler
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When you wrote at the end: "Please Review!"
I thought: "PLEASE CONTINUE!"
It's such a great story, no kidding, please continue.
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I freaked out when I saw 'Puck' had finally been updated after such a long and agonizing absence. "Welcome back!" I am so pleased to see you are back to writing and hopefully feeling better too.

I've missed this story!

I dispise Richard for how he is treating Puck and hope that Edward can save him before it's too late.
person Lisa
schedule March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back Dongs! :)

Boy that Richard is some sort of sadist, isn't he? What a monster! :(

I'm glad Edward's not upset with Puck anymore. I should have re-read some chapters, but I kinda remember Edward being pissed at Puck for some reason, maybe taking all those drugs? Diabetic drugs, right?)

Hopefully Rick the Dick won't find them! :)

Looking foward to the next installment Dongs! =)
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I am really worried about you now especially since you mentioned having pneumonia! I hope you are out of the hospital and still alive!!!!!!!

Get well soon!
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's what you get for theiving Puck. heh heh. Loved the first chapter I am going to read the next :) I just want to know what was in that suitcase... got me curious. And as curiousity killed the cat I'm off to chapter two.

CrimsonWatersAlien
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OUCH

I feel sorry for Puck. I can't believe that he'd mistake, oh well I guess Puck looks like a street kid so I guess that would be way. Great second chapter

CrimsonWatersAlien