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by yumezutto

schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah a little short, but that's alright :p, everyone has their way of writing! I have to say the setting is very unusual.... really interested on seeing where this goes! Keep it up ^^;;!
person smint45
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit^^ Well that explains why he is in the underworld ^^ I wonder if that happend because Justin was lieing. I can't wait for more see you soon!!!!
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, i really like it, cant wait for more.!!!!!
person smint45
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start!!! I want more ^^