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November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2. That's it? where's the rest? omg i want to read more! i'll pester you for more updates. the story is awesome! i'm looking forward to more updates. there will be more right?
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June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really thank you for the story, I like it and love to read more and see the adult Orchi and what he became, and if maybe he'll meet his father. Thank you again.
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More please, I hope you explain more about this new world.
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful beginning. Very unique. I look forward to seeing this continue!
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've already got me hooked. I love a good fantasy story and the originalty I'm already seeing in your story is very promising. The whole testing the dominant child thing reminds me a bit of the beginning of the movie 300. I like that your taking the time to thoroughly set up the world though in a way that's interesting and plot-driven. I already love little Ochtillion. I really hope you continue to update this story, it's wonderful!
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the start! cant wait for more!
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Very interesting start. I don't know how they could expect the queen to kill her child after she just spent all this time giving birth to him. Maybe Ochtillion will give them a new perspective on how to deal with things that they previously did not know how to deal with. I am looking forward to the next chapter.