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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Was this the same guy Henry, as in the first chapter? I didn't realize he was so young and I didn't realize he was a stripper. He's with CJ now? I thought he had a crush on Jose? And is Monty still in the picture?
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Loving these characters so far, can't wait for the next one.
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Kinda threw me off with the "onion breath", lol. I immediately thought ewwwwww. hahah
I kinda feel bad for Monty; obviously he can't get over Henry. Wonder what happened between them?
Anyway, looking forward to more! :) And kudos to you for writing an extremely well-written chapter, free from typos, grammatical and punctuation (or lack of) errors. :)
I kinda feel bad for Monty; obviously he can't get over Henry. Wonder what happened between them?
Anyway, looking forward to more! :) And kudos to you for writing an extremely well-written chapter, free from typos, grammatical and punctuation (or lack of) errors. :)
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August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool first chapter. I really like your characters thus far.