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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good sex! Kinda sad at the end, but can't all be happy!
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bittersweet and very moving. The mood you created was simply gorgeous and incredibly vivid. Lovely!
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful atmosphere to the whole story, it was so easy to see the imagery and feel the emotions :) And the ending, you're so sad it's over because even in this short little story you've still managed to make me care about them but you can't help but feel that that's the way it was supposed to happen (if that makes sense). Great story though, it was a really nice read ^_^
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hermoso, ana maria