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person Aveleene
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hell I knew it! >o<
It's always the boy every one likes who is the asshole! xD

Good tha t i liked Oz from he start

But I think you have put the wrong name in a sentence
"As I hyperventilated, Oz took a swig of the water and pressed his mouth to mine."

It shoud be Danny shoudnt it?
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man... Cam sounds like he is trying to get raped.and i still don't know how i feel about Oz
Thanks for the update. Fried macaroni and cheese balls sound delicious
person Aveleene
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually like Oz... althought I think you wan't to make him the bad Guy it's kinda hard not to like him ._."
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh Cam your as delusional as ever, but oh so cute, and poor Dany. Is there any chance of seeing something from his point of view. I love NIcks i see him as a very dynamic character, you should so write a sequel about him, or something. he is such a sweat heart.
Aren't red vines ron and harry's favorite candy
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea why you don;t have more reviews. I love this,I like your writing style it flows well and your characters are cute. who doesn't love high school drama anyhow?
person Aveleene
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww I love where this is going x33

Keep on i wanna read more *-*

I personally like Oz more :3